Thirteen is a girl :D

Maybe go back and fix the pronouns?

Man, she'll be an absolute beast when she learns to start using atmospheric water vapor more casually. The air is about .4% water vapor on average, which means for every single cubic meter of air, Rei will have about 40 Liters of H2O to work with. That's asinine. Not to mention what'll happen when she becomes a little more unhinged and starts weaponizing blood. Yeeeesh

Really, really strong start :D

You have me hooked already. The first chapter is almost always what determines whether I drop a story, and it doesn't look like I'll be dropping this. I'll post a more extensive review after I read more :D

Rei is a 12 out of 10 name, but bnha already has both a Rei and a Reiko. And Higuchi makes me think of the corporate villain from Death Note. Not a criticism, just a comment

chapters 8 and 9 seem to be missing cause before this chapter it was labeled in your story as 7 this is labeled as 20 I believe and the next chapter is labeled as 21 if I'm not wrong

I think this Chapter is on the wrong place

rereading this is definitely a trip through memory lane. falling in love again with TodoReiko 3 I feel so giddy with their moments, that are so simple yet so intimate and sincere. i’m so happy seeing you active again. :)

Aww, I loved the little moments between Rei and Todoroki. They’re just a couple of precious dorks :3

Love this! I can’t wait to read the next one!

the person below me is triggered because someone criticized their favourite fanfiction. disregard their white-knighting, as is all rabic mutterings.

Whoever wrote the review below me is full of it. Like yeah, some valid points in there I suppose, but bringing down someone’s writing because you don’t like it is really low.
I, personally, live, breathe and need this story. I quite honestly find myself want to make fanfictions about ur fanfiction but oh well.
Don’t listen to CoreSymphony, cause that’s one person out the TWO THOUSAND that didn’t like this.

I wish I could enjoy this story like everyone else. I've read the reviews on how good it is but everytime I pick it up I'm just not interested.

I don't say that to be mean but these types of MC's just ruin the story. I've gone up to chapter 4 and have a barely readable and vague character, that just so happens to know what to say every time because she's just so "observant".

She's not relatable, seems to not have flaws and has too many instances where her influence seems more like a Mary-sue type character that can change the flow of the story even tho she should be just as clueless as the rest of her class in most cases.

Her telling Bakugo to change fists in the first fight was too convenient and didn't give this character and her team a more realistic fight that could have been won even if it's not a canon fight.

The part that really turned me off was when they were picking the class rep. How does she know Iida is best suited for the job when these characters barely know each other right now. The whole reason he was picked was from how he was able to calm the crowd ect. Other than that Iida should seem like an uptight and rigid character until he is shown his worth not because this story's MC can tell right away that he would be perfect. No one picked him because they thought he was stuffy and overbearing not because they can see him as a good leader. This in turn goes back to that over observant characteristic of this MC. It's just too convenient and not realistic.

So far this story seems jumbled together as though it's trying to force character development without a proper timeline or sequence of events to get them there. If I'm being honest it's hard to get passed the first few chapters.

I missed mah girl! I just want to hug her! Lol and The angry Pomeranian defending his Guppy~ I always find it amusing to how Bakugo defends his friends.

Fuck, this chapter hit too close to home. About not being able to believe, or know their false, the compliments people try to build you up with. About isolation making itself the norm, and anything else becomes scary. Damnit, got me tearin’ up. There were definitely some laughs, like when Kaminari said, “At least evolve me.” Bro, that had me dying. Another excellent chapter.

Es una obra maestra todo este fic. Te amo autor sama

hello! I just chanced upon your story today while looking through older fics and I want to say that I hope you'll keep this going! the plot is quite interesting and I'd like to see where this leads to. hope you could maybe update again? thanks!