Reviews for Human Shaped Constellation |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Hey, Truly loving you story so far! I added it to my favorites! I love the gradual change in every prospect character in MHA thanks to Rei's influence. I love that Shouto gradually begins to care for her and seek her out in each chapter- and how he secretly likes her. I'm hoping you'll put a chapter where they almost kiss but get interrupted before doing so by another 1a classmate, like Mina or Kaminari. You know how they do in anime in general? I can imagine Rei is having another one of her crises and Shouto seeks her out again to bring warm comfort. Only this time, she tries to thoroughly dismiss him and conceal her tears but he corners her regardless, and, after a heated but soft exchange, she raises her hands to his face, cupping both sides of his head, and , after a moment of looking at each other's eyes, she leans in slowly and he closes his eyes, standing perfectly still, waiting. Just as their lips about to touch, her name is being shouted by one of their friends who were searching for them after being gone for so long. Both her and Shouto's eyes can snap open at the same time, just as Kaminari or whoever student turns the corner and catches sight of them. And it would be a sight to see. Whoever student you choose, can blush furiously, stammer out an apology, tells Rei that her presence is needed or something, and then dash away, while Rei and Shouto stay staring after them, frozen and then slowly pry from one another. The full realization of what she almost did hits Rei and she blushes and pivots, unable to look at Shouto. He says her name and she quietly apologizes. He doesn't care, and she almost jumps when he whispers something into her ear, stating next time she should run into a more suitable spot, indicating that she should have come to a place where no one would interrupt them next time. She freezes to her spot, hearing him walk away, but unable to turn around, her heart beating and the redness never melting from her face. Could you imagine a scene like that? Cool right? You should write it down! There's something that's puzzling me too. Does Bakugo have feelings for Rei? Cause if he does, then that's going to be one hell of a love triangle. But I feel as if her and Shouto have more chemistry with one another. I feel as if she likes him more. Who wouldn't? If he does secretly like her, then I can imagine his raw bitterness when he sees them in one chapter as they embrace one another or when they sit close together in another chapter and Rei decides to put her head on his shoulder for warmth or comfort. I think you can imagine that too. XD Tell me what you think! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh fuck! And all this while I just assumed reiko was a guy What the hell man! I am a dumb shit! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I loved this story from the first paragraph. |
![]() ![]() ![]() absolutely great chapter. you have such an amazing way with words, your writing is very beautiful. super stoked for the new chapter tho. feels like it's been forever waiting for this! but also no worries in regards to your AN. this chapter was great. and when it comes to your life, take all the time you need when your in a slump. |
![]() ![]() ![]() So happy you updated! What a great chapter to bring her back into the group! I loved it! Thank you |
![]() ![]() ![]() um, im confused? I think you skipped a chapter author? there is no prelude or anything, just into the sudden revealment of the zombie OVA of BNHA? Also, chapter 22 is the same as chapter 19...? I love this BTW! I think I'm going to wait for you to fix this before continueing reading, becuz I love this fic way too much to ignore the problem and read it just like that. I can't savor your fic as well, if I do... |
![]() ![]() ![]() We. Are. Back, baby. This is definitely my favorite ongoing fic. I won’t lie that I’m not here for the drama, because I totally am, but I really want to just give Reiko a hug. And that bit about her dropping her phone on her face during a call: me, 100% me. I still can’t get over how realistically quirky she is and I love it. When she was thinking that her suffering wasn’t much compared to others, I was like, “Stop it, you’re being too relatable right now.” We use suffering as an excuse to feel bad about ourselves, but we’re also scared that we’re over exaggerating or just using that for attention. In that way, we diminish our own suffering, making ourselves feel even worse as a result, while putting other people’s suffering above our own. And I was just like, “No, Rei, don’t do this to yourself.” Now that that’s out of the way, I have been way too obsessed with Bakugou over the last month or so. I literally squealed at just him being… him, in his first interaction in the chapter. As for the slow burn ShotoxRei, or Shorei, I’m here for it. I like how Bakugou is serving as the protective brother/best friend to Rei, seeing as how the only person in 1-A he hasn’t warmed up to is the one with the oblivious, but obvious, crush on someone he considers like a sister. Great chapter as always, and can’t wait for more. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Rei’s talk with her mom almost had me in tears Dx so much rawness I wanted to hug her! I’m happy she’s slowly making progress and she’s getting better! Aaah the training camp~ it’s too hilarious about the Bakusquad’s reaction lol xD oooh and Shinsoooo~ such a badass hehe |
![]() ![]() ![]() I was SO excited to see a new chapter posted! I absolutely love this story you have created. Cannot wait for the next chapter! Reading your story has really helped me with my own depression, giving me a wonderful distraction and something to look forward to. So even though I only stumbled upon it recently, I knew you hadn’t updated in a whilebut am so so happy you did. You have a wonderful way with words and I think you are giving everyone who reads this a little bit of a lift when they do |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really enjoyed this chapter and the different narrativeit lets us see a very intimate part of what’s happening in her head. As someone who also struggles with depression and anxiety, it was like looking at my own journal. I’m very glad you took the choice on the narrative for this chapter, I know it probably wasn’t easy, but you did it beautifully! Now we have a huge insight of what she is going through |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh I REALLY hope that you continue with this story! Such great writing. |
![]() ![]() Well I guess there's still not an update |
![]() ![]() I really liked this fanfiction but I just wanna know when are you going to put on the next chapter as it has been 7 months from last update |
![]() ![]() ![]() Can’t wait to read more! Like how you don’t completely follow the anime, and reading this did get confusing at some points. Still enjoy it though. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I just looked up that song, "take me home" and it totally fits them. Oh! I had a constructive criticism. I noticed in some conversations, mainly when Rei is quipping with someone, there is just dialog but no "he said or she said" and it can be hard to follow. At least for me it is! Just thought I'd pass that along. Otherwise I absolutely love your writing style and character development. Keep up the amazing job |