Reviews for It's All Worth It |
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![]() ![]() ![]() WHOA, whats with the falcon slap from Tristan? |
![]() ![]() Yeah!Torture Tea!1 |
![]() ![]() ![]() Why the hell?! I'm crying :(( waaaaaaawaaaawaaaa waaaaa I'm crying how dare you serenity's dad...? I loved seto! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh GID that's sad.. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Is it over...? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aww I didn't know they slept together :(( |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wuz she gonna do...? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Poor girl!. |
![]() ![]() ![]() OMG I HAVE GO READ THAT CHAPTER! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I want more! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh god not another cliffs! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh his whats she gonna do...?! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh gosh poor him! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh god this is good, really good XD |
![]() ![]() Hm, interesting concept. It was an ok story considering it's your first one but it's not the best I've read. The dialogue and plot felt rushed especially in the beginning. The way the characters spoke, for me, was too simple and over dramatic. The biggest problem I had though was that the characters, especially kaiba, felt ooc most of the time. Not trying to be mean, just some constructive criticism for future stories you might write. With more practice you'll get better so keep up the good work. |