re-reading this, I really hope you continue this one day. its good

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this is great

This is really good so far. Thank you so much for writing it!

This is super interesting! I like the take on the lifevests, and that it follows a soft build into daily life but doesn't forget the future that looks ahead. Your si is really engaging and relatable. I can't wait to see where you go with this.

This is a really good start to what looks like a very interesting story. I really life what you did at the end though because it hooks the readers into wanting another chapter. Can't wait to see more of your work!

this is very nice! hope to read more soon

Very interesting. So will this be a self-insert following the Marine side instead of the pirate side? That would be a first for sure! I look forward to reading more. You've got talent.

Continue pleaseee

You've peaked my interest

Keep up the good work

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(the eighty three is supposed to be a thumbs up(the eight is the thumb and palm, the three is the curled fingers))