Reviews for Spitfire
fernandfeather chapter 10 . 10/17/2017
Heartbreakingly good.
fernandfeather chapter 1 . 10/17/2017
I appreciate the detail you put into this story. As an aro spectrum person myself, I also don't really get romance. I read it a lot though! A quasiplatonic trio makes me happy.
jroseley chapter 10 . 10/17/2017
So much pain and insecurity. Hopefully Harry and Hermione are able to help each other process all of this.
lizzzsunshine chapter 10 . 10/16/2017
Ughhhhhhh Harry and Hermione are so frustrating! They should be celebrating! Throwing their arms around Ron and never letting go! Who cares why he left?! He’s back now and he’s not a traitor. Sigh. Wonderful chapter. Waiting on the edge of my seat for the next one!
Guest chapter 10 . 10/16/2017
Yes he dooooeeees! He loves you guys so muuuch!
polkorz chapter 10 . 10/16/2017
I'm just wondering... Did Hermione realize Ron is blind? I can't wait for the moment she and Harry see Ron with all his scars...
loverhr chapter 10 . 10/15/2017
how did she conclude that ron doesn't love her? so messy this chapter...!
AzureAlquimista chapter 10 . 10/15/2017
Good chapter... A lot of things have changed since Hogwarts... but others are still the same. Ron low self-esteem and Hermione insecurities still making things hard.

Ron and Hermione characters hadn't changed a bit...

Ron's insecurities make him don't try, this way he can't fail... He always puts himself down (often with Hermione help)... He needs someone to believe in him, to show him uncritical love and appreciation (as Lavender did). Hermione was unable to do this because her own insecurities, and this didn't change until the last part of the last book...

Hermione is insecure too, but she reacts almost the opposite way... making sure she is the best in the things she do... She tend to put down all peolpe around her to make herself look better, and don't like to be second best at all...

Both are very protective and supporting on Harry. Obviously, as both are men, this can't affect Hermione, but support Ron believings about his "worthless status" in Hermione eyes...

Both thinks the other is way too good for them.

Ron is resigned to this, and do little about it. He thinks Hermione is too good for him, and He thinks she knows it... His only response are jealous attacks and to put down Hermione's "maybe boyfriends"... as Krum.

Hermione, as always, do the total opposite. At some level she knows Ron low self-esteem, but she can't do anything about it, thinking if He really knows how good He is, (and she isn't) He never will take her... She always tries to show Ron how good she is, (often putting him down in the process and worsening his low self-esteem)...

About Ron leaving the tent? I think all are guilty... Hermione is a bit hypocrite putting all the blame on him...

We never know if the locket was targeting Ron for a possession... Ron was injured and was the only pureblood, so he was the perfect target... Ron was, too, the most attuned to magic: He was the only one to feel the taboo in Voldemort name... But not matter he had the locket, He is guilty for leaving...

Harry? He reacted almost as bad as Ron, but without the locket, and He asked him to leave. If He hadn't do it, Ron never would had left them.

And Hermione? She had to be the one to stop the discussion. Not matter the way. She could had petrified both of them, and give them the lecture of their life's... but she didn't... The moment Ron told Harry She had criticised him, She went in panic mode, forgot all about to stop the row, and only tried to save her face in front of Harry...

Will Slakeboot talk to Hermione about the row? What will Harry think? Or Hermione, when she had calm down... mmm... Next chapter will be interesting, too...
Zalini chapter 10 . 10/14/2017
Well that did not go well at all. Gosh what a mess they always make of each other. I truly believe that no matter how broken they both are, they can only be healed by each other in the end. I can only hope that your great story leads them there somehow...and sometime. I also loved the fairy character btw. Please continue as this is an amazing story so far.
notsing chapter 10 . 10/14/2017
Merlin! Why isn't anyone rejoicing and calling for the fatted calf to be butchered because Ron's alive and been found not guilty? What's wrong with these people? I want to smack Harry and Hermione. Ron should not have to prove himself to them. Good, if painful chapter, thanks for posting.
avid reader chapter 10 . 10/14/2017
Talk about not getting it. Hermione heard the locket tell her how she treated Ron. How she never stood up for him. He never could do anything right in her eyes. Is she even listening? He's telling her that and her only conclusion is that a) he does not love her anymore and b) it is basically his fault. Talk about delusional. At least,as self absorbed as Harry is, he realizes he need to think things through before doing anything. You are right, Ron understands his "friends" a!ot better then they understand him or perhaps care to understand him. Thank you for the update. Please continue. I cannot wait.
nirdoodle chapter 10 . 10/14/2017
It is so frustrating how self-absorbed Harry and Hermione can be. Kingsley has just told them that Ron was subjected to unimaginable horrors at the hands of the deatheaters so you would think there would be some compassion in their attitudes. But -no! They are so busy throwing themselves a pity party that they cannot see the pain that Ron is in. Why is Hermione's first instinct to hurt Ron - why answer "Yes" when asked if they were happy when that is a lie. And to conclude that "Ron doesn't love her anymore" - how blind can she be to who Ron is and what he is trying to do here.

Of course Ron is not helping because he just assumes that they don't need or want him. I know that Harry and Hermione will come around eventually but UGH - I just want to knock there heads together and tell them to open their eyes.
banzi chapter 10 . 10/14/2017
I'm enjoying your story. Eventually they'll figure it out. I hope.
Guest chapter 10 . 10/14/2017
Gosh each chapter is never enough...I’m dying for the next update already! The emotions in this story are so raw and real. Can’t wait for Harry and hermione to learn the truth so they can begin to move forward.
ScarletProphecy14 chapter 10 . 10/14/2017
Ugh. I should have known their meeting would have gone that way. I was hopeful that he would tell her the truth... ugh. Still loving this story and eager for the next chapter!
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