Reviews for Spitfire
ironhair chapter 17 . 5/31/2021
Where's the w in
Elone Pep Trearacel

I thought her name was penelope Clearwater
ironhair chapter 12 . 5/31/2021
Where's his phoenix btw?
ironhair chapter 11 . 5/31/2021
Scrapping out infection, what the actual heck?
He shouldn't have been released from the hospital without being treated after so much torture. This is ridiculous. Going to speed read this to see how you salvage this.
ironhair chapter 10 . 5/31/2021
While I'm sure you have written a lovely story, the self victimisation and making things worse for themselves, even if they are damaged and not thinking straight, feels it's just for story development and doesn't feel believable.
It's not stoicism.
ironhair chapter 8 . 5/31/2021
Didn't like this obvious story development plot that's based on impatience and not listening.
ironhair chapter 7 . 5/31/2021
Wow. Finally starting to understand and what a twist.
ironhair chapter 1 . 5/30/2021
rolygarcor chapter 23 . 5/16/2021
Dude! I need more. This story is soooool good
rolygarcor chapter 22 . 5/16/2021
You had an awesome outline for the story and never finished it! man that sucks! I love this story and would love to read the rest
Ronnie11 chapter 23 . 5/11/2021
plz update plz it's a very intresting and wonderfully written plz update
Pk930 chapter 23 . 5/1/2021
Honestly, I love this story, I'm just here to brag about windy being on OUR discord server, badass ron who can kick ass with knives and lots of crying too, a perfect story !

if you do wonder where you can find windy, it's on fate discord -another crazy masterpiece, the best story on , and it's ron-centric-
guest chapter 23 . 4/16/2021
Guest chapter 1 . 3/15/2021
. Oh my god. What a story. What a masterpiece. What a crazy masterpiece. But... omg. It's an unfinished work ! Aaaaah the frustration. Aaaaah the dismay. I have read this in 3 parts, litteraly mad to know how Ron would go uncovered and the naked truth delivered to Harry and Hermione. I have cried many times, i was suffering with Ron you know. I felt the physical pain, the mental suffery, the loneliness. The feeling of being a stranger to his own. I wish he will find peace after destroying the horcrux. I you don't finish this story it will be as if Ron will be living in a neverending nightmare. How I wish him to be relieved from all the pain. You're leaving Ron in despair. I hope you find the will and strength to finish your amazing piece of art. Thank you for writing this already. Thank you so much.
PS: I really hope the author still read the comments ! Please ️
Guest chapter 1 . 3/11/2021
It's me again. You don't know me (ok you do but I never register myself lololol), but I've posted a lot of comments on this story since 2018 (for example, every time you saw a guest asking for Harry and Hermione to grovel on the was me). I reread Spitfire often, and I'll keep waiting for you and rererereading your story until the end of times. You've got a really faithful fan haha.
I think I may know chapter 7 by heart now - I mean really, I can finish the sentences as soon as my eyes land on them. Why this chapter you may ask ? Because it's one of the ONLY times human beings learn about what happened to Ron and show him respect and compassion in this story, so my soul needs it while waiting for the next chapters to come (that will surely bring MORE angst).
Every great writer on this hellsite has a unique touch in their writing, that I describe with colours and sensations. For example, I surprisingly always associate Solstice Muse with a bright yellow; when I think of her, I picture a sunny and lively beach where I'd be trying to get off the Earth.
Your world, the way I feel it, is harder to describe - it's very intense, in sharp contrasts. I see a city made of steel, very grey, where every touch of colour (though those touches of colour are mostly comprised of red hot red and dark blue) is absolutely striking. Nothing but angles. I know that when I enter the city, I'll feel as if I'm going to get cut or burned at any time. It's so sharp. In this city the sky is only made of clouds, and sometimes a soft fog will engulf the streets.
I must really sound like a madwoman. Damn. It's so hard to express the way I experience the world without sounding weird. I hope you're not cringing right now if you read this (...I know that, if I were in your shoes, I'd be like "wft?") - just know that those lines were genuine thoughts and feelings I have when I think of your fanfics (damnit, I'm really not helping my case). I'm not registered, but I feel so intimidated aha, I'm not used to sharing this kind of intimate experience.

Yours truly,

A guest who spent countless hours reading your fics
AC.nelli chapter 1 . 1/19/2021
I have no idea why I never read this story after reading Stay Standing. Probably because I was more focused on reading romances back then? Maybe.

I cried several times while reading this story, barely able to stop reading. My heart broke for Ron and the injustice of it all. Of him wanting to keep his condition a secret, which I get but I need for everyone to know what he went through.

It all started to brilliantly with Farks attaching himself to Ron. I hope Hagrid is still alive somehow, explaining it one day to Ron. This connection between the Phoenix and the Deluminator you created had been nothing short of genius.

You painted a much more grim take on the war which obviously couldn't be described as such in canon but the darkness and destruction of a real war didn't come across really while reading the books. For me, the books were much more about the magical world and their characters as well as that unique friendship between the Trio.

It always pained me that Harry and Hermione never showed Ron how important he was to them. And I 100agree with your A/N at the beginning. Ron had been my favorite character since the beginning and to me as a reader it always had been so obvious how much Harry loved Ron. Even Hermione despite the fact that we only saw things through Harry's eyes. You're absolutely right that Ron doesn't pick up on the subtle gestures of love. Ron is someone who needs to be told how valued he is. Hermione never had been good with other people and Harry is another matter all together. Harry grew up being punished for showing and wanting affection and love. Openly declaring feelings and thoughts had been forbidden. I don't think Harry ever understood that Ron needed the words, not just gestures. Should you continue this story I sure hope all three of them clear everthing out, once and for all.

Leif is probably the coolest OC I ever read about. Her interactions with Ron had been so sweet and adorable and their connection was visible in all these small gestures. It gave the story hope and light, that knowledge that Ron had someone by his side. Same with the Werewolf pack he was traveling with. And Lupin trying to give Ron someone to lean on, despite his own doom.

That Harry was jealous of the little fairy was both annoying and sweet. It showed how much Harry needs Ron. And how much Harry always took him for granted without realising.

The best thing about this story though is how you showed how self sacrificing Ron is. And how incredibly strong. Even though he was at the lowest point so many times, he always stood up again even if the chances were slim to none.

Thank you for this fic and for your dedication writing Ron-centric stories. Authors like you are the true heroes of this Fandom!

P.S. I sometimes detected some names getting spelled wrong. Like McGonagall, Remus, Bellatrix (you sometimes wrote Beatrice). That's nothing that takes away the brilliant writing though. Just thought I'd point it out.
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