Reviews for Spitfire
Guest chapter 4 . 9/3/2017
Ok, I'm so excited about this story i can't even. Please please please update as frequently as you can. I'm completely hooked in just 3 chapters already. I love your writing. So good. So excited for this!
jo2012 chapter 4 . 9/1/2017
So so excited for the fiction! The writing is amazing as always. Love the concept and premise of the story. Looking forward to the next update eagerly! Hope you have a nice day.
polkorz chapter 4 . 9/1/2017
I'm absolutely captivated by this idea! The suspense is real! ;) SO much angst, but I love it so far. I'll be waiting unpatiently for the next part. Greetings from Poland!
notsing chapter 4 . 9/1/2017
Damn, I wish Hermione had thought to ask Thomas for a physical description of Spitfire, but I suppose that would make it too easy. I hope the people on the list are found alive, but I'm bracing for them being found dead. Really good chapter, thanks for posting.
Aida Caroti chapter 4 . 9/1/2017
Omg! I wanted her to ask more about Spitfire! Cos obviously, that's Ron, right? Really enjoying this looking forward o next update
JC RH chapter 4 . 8/31/2017
I think I'll like this than Vanguard. Both are good though. This is a solid chapter.
banzi chapter 4 . 8/31/2017
Enjoyed your update. Loved how Hermione handled everything. Would Spitfire be Ron perhaps? Guess we'll find out. Wonderful chapter.
DRM7 chapter 4 . 8/31/2017
Love it so far! Please review soon!
ArumaR chapter 4 . 8/31/2017
Oh, oh, oh! This is really good, I have so many possible scenarios popping up in my head about what's to come, but I just know it'll never be half as exciting as what you have in store for us. Thank you for the swift update, I'm looking forward to the next chapter.
DarkRavie chapter 4 . 8/31/2017
I really like this story. It's an excellent read and I look forward to reading what happens in your next chapter.
notsing chapter 3 . 8/30/2017
This was great. Harrowing, but great. Some how I'm not convinced Ron's entirely a figment of Harry's imagination. Maybe Ron's in some kind of near death state and his spirit is wandering? I'm just speculating here, I don't expect you to explain. Thanks for posting.
notsing chapter 2 . 8/30/2017
Wow, I like the idea of Fawkes choosing Ron. That's original. The talk between Hagrid and Dumbledore was good. There's no one who hasn't made mistakes, and doesn't have regret. Part of being a good friend and a good person is not judging others so harshly. Dumbledore seeking absolution from Hagrid seemed fitting. Thanks for posting.
SchnitzelHunter chapter 3 . 8/30/2017
I'm at the edge of my seet here! Please update soon!
notsing chapter 1 . 8/30/2017
On your author's note, I couldn't agree more with what you said about Ron's relationship with Harry, Hermione and his family. Both Harry and Hermione constantly take Ron for granted. The only time they notice him is when he's not there, then they're angry at him because their lives are harder. Ron does make mistakes, but Harry and Hermione are hardly perfect. I get so exhausted by all the bashers who drag Ron over the coals while ignoring everyone else's flaws. Harry's extremely self-centered, and Hermione is abrasive and rather irritating. If all the fangirls who adore Hermione so much actually knew a real Hermione, they would detest her. I also wonder if all the Ron bashers are saints who have no clue what jealousy feels like. Being jealous is normal. Harry and Hermione also get jealous, but they're forgiven, But Ron being jealous is some how a major character flaw and both Harry and Hermione ought to kick him to the curb according to the bashers. You writing a realistic, dark story about if Ron hadn't come back intrigues me. All the Ron haters act like it would have been wonderful if he hadn't come back. My honest first thought is always, 'Yep, then Harry would have drowned. Wonderful.' Obviously, you're not going to have that happen. As for the trouble you have about writing sex scenes, forget about it! There are plenty of smutty stories out there; how many do we need? I also struggle to write sex and/or romantic scenes. I'm not asexual, I enjoy sex very much, but I have an offbeat sense of humor. Even in RL, every time I (or a loved one) tries to act romantic or alluring, my gut response is to giggle. I just can't take it seriously. When I try to write it, I always laugh as well, which pretty much wrecks my muse. I look forward to your new story.
Zalini chapter 3 . 8/30/2017
Intriguing start to your story. I am officially hooked so please continue.
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