Kill yourself
Kill yourself
KILL YOURSELF

The last couple chapters feel like you're going in circles with the interaction, Percy just repeats himself multiple times a thing happens then the chapter ends. Also the drama feels really forced.

I gotta ask, did Percy lose his immortality or not? These little hints and teases about it are getting kind of annoying. If he did, that feels a little dumb to me. I mean yeah Zeref had Death Magic and was cursed by a Death God but Percy was blessed by a Titan of Mortality. I feel like the blessing of the latter trumps the curse of the former.

If he did lose it, it also feels like a weak cop-out for him to be with Erza. Which honestly you could have done without him becoming mortal, it hardly would’ve been the first instance of a relationship between an immortal and a mortal.

interesante

says he's only like 3 times stronger than a regular human but he's supposed to have the curse of Achilles?

i enjoyed ths until you inored the wendy sitaution and the way you have ignored percy not going after the council in some way for the attack just. turned me off

Since when did Grover have read hair?

Wendy is not going to be happy or forgiving.

He could have incapacitated sugar boy so easily. Just making the battle longer.

Please post next chapter/s i need more and the wait for more is killing me

If you don't post more i will come find you, go to your house and force you to do more

Well, if there is further nonsense about how Angel is not a villain and other nonsense, then this story is just garbage. I hope Angel’s words are her own perverted attempt to justify herself and not your thoughts as the author about her. She herself hunted and killed other mages in canon and robbed them. And not just for self-defense!

Why was that beat down so cathartic? Lol

Helluva opening chapter

well that answered my question about how old he is

didn't say how old he is now?

really regretting keeping this in my library for so long unattended.
It was so good