Reviews for You Don't Remember Me
riverrat chapter 2 . 6/12/2014
Great writing! Heartbreaking but beautiful story.
Iva1201 chapter 1 . 1/30/2010
Have just reread this and it's really nice (well, I would leave out the songs, or put them preferably to the beginning or end in its whole but that's the only thing I would say against the piece). I know that the series are closed now with different scene of Snape "returning" but I was not very much satisfied with Rowling in that part of the book, so if you write more on this, I for one, would certainly read it. (-: If not, just a thank you for having shared with us. (-:
wanling chapter 2 . 3/16/2009
i think the songs are ok, but not really necessary.

i like the story! and i look forward to more albus/severus content! hope you continue this story, it has great potential!
Kerubim chapter 1 . 11/28/2007
UPDATE! I hope you update this story soon, happy writing.

XD
Iva1201 chapter 2 . 7/6/2006
This is quite sad - I have found this fic of yours as late as today - it is a type I was looking for for quite a long time! - and then I realise you have written these two chapters such a long, long time ago - and I probably won't get the slowly forming trust developing between these two during the training and Snape's many months of spying and first years of teaching. Pity!
Lady Silver Witch chapter 2 . 7/21/2005
interesting fic.

keep it up!
miss3y chapter 2 . 3/31/2005
I really liked it, you should continue. Just don't make it slash, that is just NASTY, especially between Sanpe and Dumbledor *shudders*
hipa chapter 2 . 1/2/2005
Wow...wow...

I really liked this story, Sev seems to be so real...

So young and hurt.

Hopefully he will start trusting again...

and hopefully those who he trusts wont betray him.

As for the songs...

You have got absolutely perfect songs this far!

And thats why I now like them...usually they are annoying.
heaven shadow chapter 2 . 10/3/2004
I adore this, absolutely and completely adore it. I do hope you continue soon!
Kemenran chapter 2 . 3/23/2004
More please.
emma chapter 2 . 3/5/2004
please update!
Gabs chapter 2 . 2/14/2004
Oh. My. God. You have got to continue this! I do think that this is one of the best fics I've ever read! I especially liked the line "Not you, Severus. Severus, who tried on more than one occasion to stare down the entire school, and nearly succeeded twice. Severus, who is allergic to strawberries. Severus, with the beautiful eyes." Great fic, keep it up!
Ciao!
Shimizu Hitomi chapter 2 . 11/23/2003
I love your descriptions of Snape. And the songs... are very fitting. Very well incorporated as well. The first chapter was especially poignant.

I wouldn't mind if you made it slash, but I personally feel it would detract from the story, and what you're trying to express the readers. Unless, of course, I'm reading it all wrong and you aren't particularly trying to express anything to us. But like I said, I wouldn't mind if it were... As long as you make it believable.
CuriousDreamWeaver chapter 2 . 11/6/2003
A very emotive piece. Quite interesting. Poor Sev...

Nicely written, great use of imagery and evocative language. The writing style was fluent, easy and enjoyable to read. Well done and write more!

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DreamWeaver
Epadfield chapter 2 . 10/28/2003
I love this story and I hope you update soon. I also like the songs and think you should keep them.
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