|Reviews for I Melello Atara ar Atar|
| washow chapter 1 . 12/16/2004
Cute elfling story.
| ElvenLady14 chapter 1 . 8/16/2004
I thought it was "Glorfy" or"Gofi" not "Glori" Oh well!
| seeing-spots chapter 11 . 7/30/2004
This was a beautiful story!
| seeing-spots chapter 3 . 7/29/2004
Elladan to the rescue? Poor wee Elflings. My heart goes out to both of them.
| seeing-spots chapter 2 . 7/29/2004
This is a beautiful, sad story. I was a child who often was teased by other kids and was left out when other "popular" people came along. I look forward to the rest.
| ElvenLady14 chapter 7 . 7/20/2004
Its a good story sofar but Whats Atar and Atara I thought it was Adar/Ada for Dad/Father and Naneth/Nana for Mother/mom? Oh well!
| Maiden of Valinor chapter 11 . 3/1/2004
i love it! i adore it! i worship it! it s wonderful! its beautiful! its amazing!
| Morgan chapter 5 . 2/29/2004
Oh come on! Please don't do this to me! Do I just wanna read the happy ending? All this dangerous suspense is killing me! I love 'Ro! I know you won't kill him, but putting him through all of this pain is just too much for us fluffy cuddly people to handle!
| Iawen Londea chapter 11 . 9/14/2003
Aw great ending! Although I am sad to this fic end at the same time lol. The end, with the twins, was so cute! Although I have to admit I wonder about Elladan telling Elrohir their parents loved more, because we didn't see anyone assuring Elrohir that he was just as loved. *shrugs* Great story! D
| arabella thorne chapter 11 . 9/14/2003
A good ending to this tale. I quite enjoyed it!
| Anita H chapter 11 . 9/14/2003
Very good, everything has turned out fine!
So, you are going to write a new story :) I already like the idea, so post it quickly!
| Firnsarnien chapter 11 . 9/13/2003
*Finally*, (wink, wink) an Update! Loved the cute little ending. It's so nice to have everyone home again, safe and sound! So glad you decided to end it so peacefully! I must say, you caused a few of these gray hairs on my head with several of your cliffies! LOL
I look forward to your next story, can't wait! ;)
| Kaeera chapter 11 . 9/13/2003
*points with finger and gasps* Oh my GAWD! A dead person!
*reverts to native tongue* Und alle glaubten, dieser Autor sei tot, aber nun...das ist ein Wunder...
Sorry. I always do that when I am excited. Well...common believe told me you were dead, so I was quite surprised about this...okay, stop with the joking
I had nearly forgotten about this story and was therefore pleasantly surprised to find an update mail from in my inbox. The twins are so sweet! It was ab it too short for my taste, though, but I can understand that you wanted to finish the story...believe me, I can understand it all too well!
Uhmm, anyway, I really liked it! Ro is the protagonist, that's cool! We need more of those stories :P
| dvz chapter 7 . 9/10/2003
It is frustrating that the author's credits/thanks are often easily half as long as each chapter. Please put the credits at the begining and/or end of the story, but not each installment. It is especially distracting as these are rather short chapters to begin with.
| xsilicax chapter 10 . 8/14/2003
Yay, they're back home safely!
Lots of hugs and comforts in store?
And don;t worry about the long wait, as long as we get it in the end I'm sure we can survive (just)