Reviews for Broken
Guest chapter 1 . 9/13/2005
Please update "This Kiss"
Mako-Magic chapter 1 . 2/17/2004
nice! its gd!
Malistar chapter 1 . 5/2/2003
Light! Now this is something I'd call fantastic! Goes to my favorite stories... Write more like this and I love you forever!
not sure yet chapter 1 . 3/29/2003
interesting, i like it though, pretty original and i think you kept him fairly in chacter, nicely done
Katie chapter 1 . 3/22/2003
I think you have a *very* good handle of WoT. I really liked this fic!
Lady Taim chapter 1 . 3/22/2003
Good Lord! I am so impressed! I like this, I really do... I wish I could write anything like this..! Especially I like the ending, those words, "I am broken"...
Abigail-Nicole chapter 1 . 3/21/2003
A little incoherent, but good the same...A little repetitive, too, where you said: "I am broken" so many times. Also, I think Lews Therin would intrude a little more than he did.

Read WH! It'll make you happy at the end!

*hugs her fellow WoTish people before chanting her key phrase*

ADD MORE EMOTION!1

Who! Keep writing!
Luan chapter 1 . 3/14/2003
I like! -Very- nice