|Reviews for Creating Worlds|
| gVl0b chapter 1 . 9/3
| lukas chapter 1 . 2/25
Fantastic work I need more.
| rjcelona chapter 3 . 10/13/2017
Finally another CofS story! They are very few and far in-between. I cannot wait to see where to take this. Four children/clones...boy this can be fun and confusing. Good Luck.
| Siriandemi chapter 1 . 10/11/2017
Hello, It's a good read, nothing to point out, but... I don't know how far you are going to follow the lore.
So here is some help in nobility rank:
Jinto Hyde, is a Count Earl - a female counterpart is a Countess which are 6-7 rank below Emperor
- And 2 rank above Baron. (so he is not a Baron)
To Lafiel, She is little unique, she has been provided with the rank of Viscountess vidame (which is 1 rank below a Count) by the empire, however...
She also has a title, Abriel Royal Princess. think of the Abriel family as a country with their own king, and above him is the emperor/empress.
Because of the Royalty, her real rank is a "Sovereign Princess"
which in this case is 2 Rank higher than Viscountess.
But another unique about her position is: since her grandmother is the Empress. she got another royal title, which is "Empire Royal Princess", it should be 2 Rank higher than "Sovereign Princess".
The Empire Princess title only stays so long she is "directly descended to the Emperor/Empress
I hope it helps.
| anon chapter 1 . 9/5/2017
Good start I'm looking forward to see how the story goes.