Reviews for The Beacon Civil War |
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![]() ![]() ![]() One of my favorite RWBY stories |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love this story so much, I can only read it at home though as I am too busy laughing to read in public! It is just the right amount of ridiculous fun and doesn’t overstay it’s welcome so thst it turns out really nicely. |
![]() ![]() This certainty kept me entertained for a couple hours. Very well written you have a nice way of delivering humor while keeping true to the characters natures. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Was driving home from work while listening to this final chapter when suddenly Rebel Yell plays on the radio when it was revealed the guys cross dressed and started fighting back. it was glorious. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Reading was a blast! It's hilarious! it's awesome! IT'S AMAZING! THANK YOU! THANK YOU! THANK YOU! for making this story! I'm blessed by your genius mind! thank you! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Huh, after reading this again, I just realize that Trap pun, lol |
![]() ![]() ![]() so jaune actually looks like a competent leader from the outside neat |
![]() ![]() ![]() The entire concept seems just... dumb. It's so unbalanced it's not even fun, why waste time fighting a losing war? IMO, either go full scorched earth and burn girls' supplies to the ground along with the school (nothing about civil wars is civil after all), or start blowing up supplies. All is fair in love and war. On top of that, it ruins all mixed teams with how axe-crazy everyone started behaving. I would never trust any teammate after something like that. It's one thing to fight a mock battle, it's another to deal with the crazies. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really like most of your fics, but I think this will probably always be my favorite. I dont really think there should be a whole sequel fic by any means, but id love to see a small oneshot or something similar of little snippets about how things changed around beacon because of this. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I just blitzed through this fic. I’m at a loss for words. It’s so amusing and complete, in the sense that everyone behaves in character and the plot is tight. Thank you so much for writing this! I guess we can call Jaune’s war council SCRY, as in “scary,” haha. All hail Jaune! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awesome, simply Jaunesome |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was great, an absolute banger. A Certified Hood Classic. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Russell suddenly becomes Lorgar? Wow |
![]() ![]() ![]() After having read the first Ciaphus Cain novel, I now have a much greater respect for what I already considered a great story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() A sequel, please. I beg you. I don't think I have ever laughed so hard. |