Reviews for A Sky Not His Own
Chuckney chapter 1 . 10/11/2009
This is absolutely brilliant. I just today watched Looking For par'Mach and I really wanted to find something discussing what could have happened. I love how you've handled this, the overall regret, sense of something not being right but unable to really do anything about it. Really great. :D
Strader chapter 1 . 7/26/2009
This is, quite frankly, one of the top fanfics I've read in this entire section.

Within this story, you managed to convincingly depict the warped Keiko/Miles/Kira triangle and its ramifications on Keiko and Miles' relationship in a way that is both emotionally resounding, and extremely memorable. Portraying threesomes is easy to turn into something hokey or pornographic, but you neatly dodged both of those mistakes and created a simple, basic, and honest story that resounded emotionally with the reader.

This is about as close to flawless material as one is likely to find on this website. you should be proud of yourself for having written it.
StarTraveler chapter 1 . 8/6/2004
great story
me chapter 1 . 1/27/2004
Wow. That was differnet. Odd character pairing or not, your writing is excellent. I really enjoyed reading this. Very well done!
Ananke chapter 1 . 3/10/2003
unique, very nice. This is a pairing that has always fascinated me, O'Brien and Kira, and you caught it all very nicely. Poignant and angsty. Lovely.