Reviews for You're Not Alone |
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![]() ![]() awful spelling, entirely incorrect translations of multiple languages and you write as if you dont even know english. you're grammar is heinous. use a grammar book, dictionary, thesaurus and also how can you just replace real words with ones that mean something entirely different...? do your research before using japanese or spanish words dont just fling about what you think is right. its almost insulting. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hey I really like this story so far. Just to let you know no is actually Iie. But anyways so far it looks like this story is going on my favorites. THANKS ;) |
![]() ![]() ![]() if u talk spanish in your story amiga 4 girl friends and amigo 4 guy friends! |
![]() ![]() check spelling in all chapters but I like it so far. coldfire to the max |
![]() ![]() check spelling in third chapter |
![]() ![]() ![]() I wanted to review chapter 30, but is having issues, says to alert admin that the chapter is out of range. Good story. I like the story line, I like what you have done. Honey you need a Beta though. I was really distracted and thrown out of the story when wrong words were used, such as when abort was needed and abound was used. Also it would have been easier to read the dialogue if each time a different person is talking it starts a new paragraph. This helps to keep it clear to the reader. Description needs a little work, but that just comes with practice. Good work over all. ~QueenTatooine |
![]() ![]() WTF you put naraku and kagome together what the hell were you thinking? Huh? i guess you weren't thinking at all |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is a great story love it |
![]() ![]() WHAT IS WITH MIROKU BEING A YOUKAI? i mean honestly. |
![]() ![]() no offence or anything but you really need to work on spelling and grammar. other than that it's a great story! (and now that i've criticized you i hope I spelled everything right) |
![]() ![]() why do you call kagome kago? i always get her and koga mixed up! |
![]() ![]() That was really good! I liked all of it exept the end! I can see why you did that though. |
![]() ![]() I think this sotry is good but could be better in my honest opinion things happened a bit quick and without enouf drama but over all the plot was really good and it was fun to read ill be sure to take a glance at your sequel! |
![]() ![]() hi leeta i'm a big fan of ur story i was wondering if i could have a part in the stroy as inuyasha's crush. my name is natalie so u could spell it |
![]() ![]() who is kagome's boyfriend? plez inuyasha not naraku he's evil i konw him wa better dan ya'll do |