|Reviews for Turnscale|
| TehFriendlyXeno chapter 6 . 9/6
Okay so, I just literally discovered Xcom was a thing not more than a week ago and I am loving it.
(Playing the first game atm and I’m extremely disappointed in how unpopular the franchise is, when it concerns fanfictions being written about it)
This story definitely got my attentionmainly because it’s the first Xcom fanfic I’ve ever read, but also the fact that our main character turned into a viper and got into a relationship with an enemy viper...ah, I love enemies-to lovers fics.
However, I do have a serious complaint with what goes on in your story.
I don’t have too much knowledge of ADVENT or Xcom or the franchise in detail or even in general, but I do know that the Vipersof all ADVENT troopswould be the least susceptible to ditching the cause. I could be mistaken however, because I haven’t gotten to Xcom 2 yet personally, but I still make my case. Regardless, I am simply appreciating you for writing for a franchise that apparently doesn’t get a lot of lovingespecially for the Vipers...*lustful staring commences*
Anyways, the other complaint I have is that the relationship between them just went wayyyy too fast. I know some people just instantly ‘click’ and they get together faster than you can bust a nut (or pop your cherry) to the best porn out there, but c’mon man, put some actual build-up before starting a romantic relationship.
And the last complaint I have, is that there wasn’t enough describing of the environments around the charactersthe visual settings if you will. I had to make up what the surroundings looked like and that was kind of a pain to do.
Lastly, I hope you haven’t abandoned this fic and I would be more than happy to assist in helping you write and/or give you ideas for this story of yours. I really like your other Aliens fic. Please take my criticism into careful consideration and don’t hesitate with contacting me. After-all, I AM a friendly xenomorph
| Guest chapter 6 . 9/2
U gonna update this masterpiece soon ik your probably busy thou
| Guest chapter 3 . 9/2
| sergalus chapter 6 . 9/2
great story, I wonder how I missed it. But I wonder if you are still active since all your stories are not updated for a while.
| Guest chapter 6 . 8/31
Hey I just found your story and I love how this story is going plz continue it soon
| Guest chapter 6 . 8/31
Bruh I am hoping you are making a new chapter soon but take your time if needed
| Heean chapter 6 . 8/11
I absolutely adore this fic. So please do not stop writing it, but do take your time.
| Guest chapter 6 . 8/5
Loved the story can't wait for more. Especially on how Mirna will react to finding out that Xalah is alive and working for xcom. Once again I hope to see more in the future and maybe you could work in a moment where the vipers find out that the thin man are vipers as well.
| Kane Follower chapter 6 . 7/25
Another author gone ? Dammit...
| IronGiant9000 chapter 6 . 7/17
I am loving this story dude.
Honestly I have never played XCOM 2 but I am watching gameplay of it and it looks interesting.
But if there is one thing I gotta say is this: don't give up on this story continue cause honestly I think this will have potential to draw in more readers if you continue man.
But if you are feeling stressed about writing stories, no worries man just take your time and keep on trucking.
| hunterX95 chapter 6 . 7/11
Can the Vipers in this unhinge their jaws?
| dspendragon125 chapter 6 . 7/5
I am happily waiting for more.
| Guest chapter 6 . 6/3
Shits getting intense
| Guest chapter 3 . 6/3
| Some guy 161 chapter 6 . 6/3
please continue, it's really good.