Reviews for Contractual Obligations: Deleted Snippets
Guest chapter 1 . 9/29/2017
I noticed someone mention that the jester would be the one to critique the king. While I agree, it bears mention that King Arthur's Jester was Dagonet. As a knight of the round himself he likely would not yet have the position so Arturia would be lacking a court Jester.
thepkrmgc chapter 1 . 9/16/2017
i have to wonder how it would affect the character dynamic if Gwen ended up falling for Archer instead of Lancelot, talk about the pathos!
rickyp01 chapter 1 . 9/16/2017
Such a position, allowed to speak frankly DOES exist in a mediƫval court, and guineverre's claims of ignorance are weird as she should be familiar with such a person,
its a jester.
jcampbellohten chapter 1 . 9/9/2017
Ooh, a bonus treat!
Shirosakurai chapter 1 . 9/5/2017
it is interesting to see the perspective of guinivere as it is the closest to arturia, also because of that misunderstanding between the two and its unrelated relationship guinever will end up in the arms of lancelot who is the most similar to arturia, great Deleted Snippets
Guest chapter 1 . 9/5/2017
Not bad
Z chapter 1 . 9/4/2017
Oooh, a companion piece to a fic that I enjoy? Alright! It's nice that we get to see what Sir Ector and Guinevere's impressions of Archer are. It definitely makes sense and is very entertaining that both father and son are annoyed by Archer.
skrapsynneh chapter 1 . 9/4/2017
Cool and interesting to get some other possible thoughts.
The Rupture chapter 1 . 9/4/2017
Interesting I hope to see more. Can't wait for the next chapter.
God-of-Machines chapter 1 . 9/4/2017
I find it quite acceptable;
It is well centered on one of the key characters in which we can see its reference point in the others, although we have already been able to see the development from the perspective of Gwinivere, but that is what it is ...
Something important, I had emphasized how extensive it might be, I think 120k would be the most appropriate.
Enough for the most demanding for a while, balanced to pause to work on the following chapters, for at least a month and a half.
But if you're still unsure I recommend that you take a look at (Fate-In Time) author Parcasious; I am sure that you can find a little inspiration and publish the track with the other fellow readers, I have seen good critics there.