Nice and interesting story. Thanks for writing it. Please update soon.

This A/N reads as if there were it were well into ihe story not the first. Fleshed out ? They glanced at each other. That's their totall interaction thus far. Harry has't shown any "skills" At all. At this point, has he done anything showing he's not a squib?

So, like, the thing is that whilst you're free to write whatever you wish, there really should be some effort involved to make sure that you actually make a cohesive story. Chapters 4 5 and 6 have very little at all connecting them, and 4 and 5 are especially bad - sirius is suddenly friendly with Harry despite never having met him, Daphne is aware of this, and yet the years fiest DaDA class is repeated.

When you're trying to write long form prose you owe it to yourself to put more effort in to getting your ducks in a row.

Keep it coming please I have to know how it ends

Omggg. I am loving it.

Hopefully you will come back and finish it.

This feels like there are parts missing

ok, first off. i do like this story a lot. however, there are some gaps that need to be filled in.. for example, sirus is suddenly harry's buddy without even describing how that came to be. in one chapter sirius is the enemy the next he is at harry's transformation. this fic has potential but needs to be a more cohesive story.

Good onyou for doing what YOU want with your story. You shared your time and talent so it belongs to you.

Thanks for letting him challenge her. He doesn’t need to exchange keepers

I was really enjoying this story, but this chapter makes no sense. We revisited the boggart, it's referencing events I haven't read, and it took a left turn that I don't have the info to follow. I'm guessing I reached the end of an edited bit, but maybe if you kept this story the original and posted the edited version as a separate story, readers could enjoy both?

It's been 6 years. I really hope you will finish this fanfic. Please update

Why is Daphne heartbroken? What is the nature of the bond/curse you keep mentioning?!

What is this bond/curse?! Seriously, are there missing chapters? Please add them if so...

Are there chapters missing? How does he suddenly know Sirius? They hadn't met yet last chapter. Also what is this bond that's suddenly being mentioned? I know in your AN last chapter that you said there may be discrepancies but there is clearly missing information that's making the story confusing instead of interesting. I really like this fic but I tend to put off reading it due to the lack of coherency.

i now a ot of people bitch about goblin healer but it makes sense for example we know they have curse breakers. it would make more senses to learn to beal them then pay saint mungos

Lovely story so far, hope you update this