Reviews for No More Games
Architect52 chapter 51 . 9/9/2020
Please say this one hasn’t been abandoned I’m just getting back into these things and I’m really intrigued now
ICZYS HOSTAGES OF LOVE chapter 33 . 8/21/2020
plz uppate i am a huge fan of this story and cang wait to the next chapter
Bronze chapter 4 . 8/13/2020
Ya, unfortunately, Hermione at this point in time is still convinced that the so called adults can and will solve everything. Maybe they would if Fumblemort would allow them to actually do their jobs instead of playing games with students lives. If Daphne's scent calms Harry down like that, does that imply she's his mate? I can't say as I don't like the idea. But unfortunately, she's gonna have to fight Fumblemort for Harry's future.
Bronze chapter 3 . 8/13/2020
Why anyone would expect Harry Potter to be a normal Werewolf after being infected is beyond me! Hasn't it become clear yet that Harry just doesn't do normal?! So of course he'd be a magical Animagus when mixed with Lycanthropy. It's simply par for the course. Though I think they all should bee extremely grateful he didn't become a Dragon instead! Or some other unknown creature! Leave them all scratching their heads trying to figure what he is. This reminds me of the song form Hew-Haw. Doom, despair and agony on me is the line I remember thee most.
Bronze chapter 2 . 8/12/2020
Poor Daphne. I doubt very much she'll a, believe what she hears if Harry tells her he no longer truly trusts Fumblemort and b, Fumblemort has stolen a large summon of money from the Potter vaults as well as valuable property. But then again, she just might. As for Granger and Weasley, they might just be on their way out as friends. It'll all depend on whether or not they can accept Daphne, Blaise and Tracy. I think Hermione might adapt and enjoy a friendship with them. She could certainly use the advice about her attitude. As for Ron, I think this is the end of his friendship with Harry. He simply can't change his attitude towards Slytherin House. Now while the majority of Death Eaters nay come from Slytherin not everyone does. Peter was a Gryffindor. Yet he betrayed James, Lily and Harry for the promise of protection and likely power. So, therefor there must be or of been Death Eaters from the other three Houses. But Ron will have an extremely hard time wrapping his mind around that.
Bronze chapter 1 . 8/12/2020
Frankly, it's never a surprise to me when some author names A.P.W. as a thief. I expect it of him really. He reminds me too much of those tele-Evangelist you always hear on the tv. Give me money! Give me money! Well, in ol' Fumblemorts' case it's more like whatever he can steal form whoever he can steal it from! In these fics I think if the Goblins were to do an in depth audit of every account he had anything to do with they'd find he was extremely dirty! And usually Harry doesn't find out till around year five. In some stories his inheritance is completely gone along with his family magic. In one I remember well not only did Fumblemort take from Harry's vaults but he opened them for any and everyone who wanted anything in them. Whatever they didn't they burned so Harry couldn't have it. Too bad it backfired on them. Harry escaped the country to Japan where he made several deals for electronics and became the richest man in the world. Magical or muggle. But I can easily see ol' Fumblemort giving the Potter fortune away in loans that never need to be repaid. Of course the old fraud would never do that with his own fortune but somebody elses? Bet on it!
Lerris chapter 1 . 8/11/2020
I'm just not honestly fan of Harry getting bit by a werewolf... There was some other particularly convenient things I saw skimming, but that was the main one.
Gjitfv chapter 1 . 8/3/2020
Bjutfjiyh your so retarted
Murphz chapter 5 . 7/10/2020
No idea what you were thinking with this chapter, it’s a jumbled mess and your constantly mentioning events that haven’t happend yet like Harry meeting Sirius, and a bond between daphne and Harry. Confusing as all hell
jkil chapter 5 . 6/11/2020
Neotono chapter 38 . 6/12/2020
You made his wingspan stupid. 5 times the body length is absurd and He'd look ridiculous in flight.
Neotono chapter 5 . 6/10/2020
You really need to continue your rewrite of this since as it is now it makes no sense.
Ricardo chapter 15 . 6/6/2020
Was able to read up to 15 chapters and couldn’t continue. The whole encounter with Harry and Sirius is mixed up doesn’t make sense where they meet. The realtionship between daphne and harry is poorly done. Forcing them together by some instant bond through Harry animal transformation does not make it a good romance. Not to mention they obviously have feelings for each other and haven’t confessed why drag it out. Not a fan of having multiple magical animals around him. Would have been fine with just his thunderbird along with hedwig not to mention the werewolf incident was unnecessary. Harry could make a wizards oath to easily prove his innocence about not putting his name in the cup. I understand Ron being immature and bigoted but hermione? Yes she looks towards people who are teachers or in spots of powers but she’s smart enough to realize not everything they say is right along with she shouldn’t be so against Slytheirn. Story just ain’t my cup of tea and i think needs a rewrite.
RHJunior chapter 27 . 5/28/2020
You really need to post an image of that staff. I don't think your written description is... very clear. Especially in the placement of that "silver disc..."
RHJunior chapter 5 . 5/27/2020
you seem to have had the Boggart lesson appear twice...
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