Though incomplete, I highly recommend reading this story. It has a decent plot and some interesting insights into the HP world.

Author,
Thank you for sharing your story.

Hi. I love what I’ve read so far, there’s just one small detail that needs to be changed. The Patil twins, Parvati is the griffindor twin and Padma the Ravenclaw, you have them the other way round

Well to those who commented about the shift from chapter 4 to 5 its because the author was rewrote the first 4 chapters. That being said, can't wait for the rest of the story to continue.

How the fuck does chapter 4 lead into chapter 5. Its like there's a whole chapter in the middle that you skipped. All of a sudden Harry knows about Peter and sirius? When ? HOW? Yo dawg you get drunk and skip some parts?

It’s like you skipped a chapter

Good lord is this going to be the type of fanfic where he and snape are friendly while his other friends drift away?

Hey, thanks for the story. It's a bit rough in the beginning, and there seems to be a couple of things that get brought up multiple times. I.e. Snape telling Harry that he's a death eater/ explaining the prophecy, et cetera and again when Lily comes back into the story. The story is still to be worth reading! So I hope you can announce if this is abandoned, being reworked, or just snail pace on an update soon. Be nice to get some closure instead of wondering, seeing as you're still active on FFN.

So now she supposedly cares about Harry...then his own guide and supposed friend vow to keep secrets and control his life...after he got done informing her that he was against being controlled...

Yeahhh, Harry is just trying to be a friend and she treats him like shit.

If she doesn't stop with her thoughts of manipulation I'm gonna lose all hope for her to become a respectable person :l

I don't like Daphne at all :l The lack of any sort of reprisal for being used and manipulated is slightly concerning as well. I hate weak Harry that is walked taken advantage of at the drop of a hat just as much as the overly angry some try to go for :l Also, how can Daphne even mention thinking he is stalking her when she is doing what she is doing?

So is this story dead or being rewritten?

I don't know if this is a deliberate thing for your story, but Parvati is the Gryffindor twin. Padma is the Ravenclaw twin.
Otherwise, this is another excellent chapter.

Your time zones are backwards. If it was mid afternoon at potter manor, itd be around midnight I think in Hawaii, not late afternoon

Excellent story! Eagerly waiting for the next chapters.. I