Lovely story so far, hope you update this

Another dead story. How sad. It seems that the good stories die and the badly written live on.

Great story hope to see more

O e of the best stories I've ever read, even if it's not complete. Idk if you will ever complete it, but it's one hell of a read.

I'm unsure if you will even get this, but Happy Holidays

I hope you come back to this story

I wonder if I will ever update again?

I really wish this got an ending

I can't take it any more. Harry is seeing Daphne just after winter break, and they're talking about what they did on break, . But YOU think it's Valentine's Day.

And all of a sudden, Sirius is just "with Harry" in the woods. Where'd HE come into the story.
And the DADA class with the boggart is done Twice! Chapter four AND Chapter 5.

I absolutely refuse to read author notes. Never have, never will. If the details are not IN the story itself, then they don't exist. You don't get A/Ns in a real book.

What BOND does Daphne share with Harry?!
What "spy earrings on Hermione?!
What Chimera?!
Things are just showing up, without the introductions necessary.
I don't think I skimmed over these details. Where were they ever explained?

Just found this today by happenstance and I’m excited to read it. It says it’s been a while since it’s been updated so I can only hope that one day in the future you find your way back to it. I’ve been waiting for over 10 years on a couple so I never lose hope.

God this is bad. And this is after you edited it to make it better? Do you know what 13 year olds are like? Have you ever heard a human being speak? Have you read a book? The social interactions are so basic and straightforward that they don’t seem like human beings having conversations.

dude what the fuck? its like im reading a completely different story from chapter 4? since when did he become a chimera? you said it was a lion, where the hell did this damn bond come from?

You have skipped around between chap 45 and left out many key points

Ok so something I can't help but point out is that your writing is becoming progressively more confusing. Entire sentences are missing in paragraphs that just leave everything fairly confusing where we end up having to infer what occurred later. Also I can't tell if you just forget entire paragraphs but there are either many gaps in the story or you just flip from one thing to another very quickly almost randomly. Lastly the entire animalistic harry thing is kind of dumb, unless he's like Fenrir Greyback and completely gave himself to the beast within all these benefits and beast like tendencies wouldn't really be a thing. Seriously showing up to the World Cup and being able to smell Daphne out from a crowd of nearly a hundred thousand of people ridiculous, not to mention smelling her primal fear.