dude what the fuck? its like im reading a completely different story from chapter 4? since when did he become a chimera? you said it was a lion, where the hell did this damn bond come from?

You have skipped around between chap 45 and left out many key points

Ok so something I can't help but point out is that your writing is becoming progressively more confusing. Entire sentences are missing in paragraphs that just leave everything fairly confusing where we end up having to infer what occurred later. Also I can't tell if you just forget entire paragraphs but there are either many gaps in the story or you just flip from one thing to another very quickly almost randomly. Lastly the entire animalistic harry thing is kind of dumb, unless he's like Fenrir Greyback and completely gave himself to the beast within all these benefits and beast like tendencies wouldn't really be a thing. Seriously showing up to the World Cup and being able to smell Daphne out from a crowd of nearly a hundred thousand of people ridiculous, not to mention smelling her primal fear.

God I am so tired of writers creating this bullshit idea that a little respect causes goblins to suddenly be nice and like you. They are a blood thirsty warrior race that has an obsessive desire for gold, they were never nice and they don't care for anything but themselves.

I hate prophecies, and I kind of hate what your doing with Zephyr. Thunderbirds are highly intelligent and powerful creatures but they can't telepathically communicate and they aren't beings flying around the world keeping order in balance. Their just big and strong birds

Ok first being a magical talent on equal standing with Voldemort and Dumbledore doesn't mean harry is going to become OP quickly. Voldemort wasn't on Dumbledore's level until after about 20 years of training after school. I personally hate natural Animagus forms that are magical creatures it's cringe and bad writing and wholly unnecessary. I have no idea what a speaker is supposed to be but I'll wait for that one to be explained. I assume Beastmaster means he will have a natural affinity with animals. As for magical cores I hate them and they obviously don't exist in HP they don't have a stored up reserve of magic in their bodies like a core. If anything magic is a muscle that gets stronger with continued use and training. Consider it more like circuits going throughout their body that allows their bodies to channel and control magic.

More please

Just the Potter Black were enough.

Never apologize for honing your craft.

Thanks for a great story

Its good but why is everyone treating a thunderbird like a common barn owl it's littrialy one of most powerful mythology creatures ever probs even a phoenix

You made him a bloody werewolf why is we uneeded there seen as worse than the plauge they bassicaly have no futures

I got second hand embarrassment reading this story, it's so cringe, guessing the author was young when writing.

Okay I was wrong, only the first two chapters were archived. That’s annoying.

For everyone who finds this fic, it was in the process of being rewritten. Chapters 1-4 are rewrote, 5-51 are the original chapters seeing as it was abandoned. The transition between chapters four and five is bad because there virtually different stories from then on. So I would suggest any new readers to paste the link to this fic in the way back machine, there you can read the first four original chapters to the story.

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