Never apologize. It’s her sister

So the spell won’t work if you are too upset

It looks like Harry will have to kill the in-law. Oh well, it will solve future problems

It’s your story. This means you have ownership.

Trust your judgment. You provide this for free in return for practicing your writing. Editing is a huge part

Great set up.

Yeah, let the relationship work as between equals. No pushing Harry around

Please update

I really enjoyed this story. Do you entertain any plans of finishing it.

How can this scene transaction happen

Ah the minds of old and new
This story is witty and entertaining with twists and turns that I did expect but the way you presented the story and the plot is fantastic and the characters are so well written and entertaining I can’t wait to read more
Phynaxum Perrilinean

Feeds? Maybe I skimmed past it too quickly? I never read anything about 'feeds'. I was just thinking 'this is completely stupid, for the fans to not be able to tell what's happening, just like in the lake.
And then there's Voldemort. Hiding in the top of a ministry sanctioned event space, ON SCHOOL GROUNDS, and no one can detect his presence.
So the ridiculously super powered Harry fiasco goes on from hete. But you know what? Not me. I'm quitting here.
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Btw... NO healthy, hormonal, overly mature, almost fifteen year old would have been able to resist getting in Daphne as knickers all this time, stunted emotions, or not. Especially with heightened senses of his animagus form. He'd smell her every time something he did excited her, and, uh, go for it.

In a whole lot of fics read (1800-ish?begun, 300 quit, 1500 complete, mostly over 20K) I have never read of Harry CHEATING in the maze. And I am even further shocked to hear Daphne think it's ok to help. Regardless of what YOUR moral compass is telling you, flying on a broom and giving maze directions is g*dzd*mn*d cheating.

I thought Harry was emancipated, and gained his Lordship, when he was at Gringotts last summer. He doesn't any longer need anyone's permission to go to Hogsmeade.

Is someone going to break down and stick their tongue in the other one's mouth, or not?!

Not expecting you to have picked this up from the movie you watched that one time (instead of reading the book), but Katie is a year younger than Angelina and Alicia. I think Lee is also, but that hasn't come up.

Sobbing?
Oh no! Tracey's gay, and now Harry is too! (if that were truly the case, I would quit reading AND erase the bookmark AND my history, before the syllables could be heard out loud. Literally faster than the speed of sound)

NOBODY impersonated Harry! G*dd*mn*t! Get your facts straight, and care enough to effing PROOFREAD your sh** before posting!

I freaking hate ex post facto writing. That 'wand' crap? Should have been covered back when it was made.

Padma. Parvati is the Gryffindor. Padma is in Ravenclaw.