NOBODY impersonated Harry! G*dd*mn*t! Get your facts straight, and care enough to effing PROOFREAD your sh** before posting!

I freaking hate ex post facto writing. That 'wand' crap? Should have been covered back when it was made.

Padma. Parvati is the Gryffindor. Padma is in Ravenclaw.

It's like you reach into a bag and pull out some part of the story to type. Then, regardless of how it fits, or doesn't, just choose another and keep going.

What SPY earrings?! You HAVE TO explain this sh**!

"Wouldn't take kindly..." Would NOT take kindly. If you're going to use a phrase, know what it means and use the right words.

' it was the first Hogsmeade trip of the NEW year' As opposed to the School year. There has already been at least two trips before winter break. (Or... of the new semester.)

Ever since WHAT attack?!

Where would a pureblood have ever heard the concept of a Utopian society?

Sirius named his animagus? Sirius met them in the forest? Sirius coming to Snape's room by elf? Uh, possibly forget to tell us some vital info?!
How, when, who, why... all that... Did they meet, talk, divulge, hug, reminisce, cry, make vows... what happened that Sirius went from blip in the news, to part of Harry's life?!

This is good. Moving on.

I'm guessing Daphne ignored Harry because of Tipsys glamour charms. She 'felt' Harry near, but then could not see him.

Flamel? That makes zero sense at all
Animagus? Anyone can become a Animagus in the HP Universe so why is it noted on this?
Beastmaster? that sounds incredibly cringe
Lycanthropy? Surely the Basilisk Venom and Phoenix Tears would of cured him of that

Why is it something is telling me the Ancient One the elves talking about is no other than Merlin.

I will be searching your page for more of this story! Loved Everything about it so far!

It's hard to find good stories that keep you glued to the screen and this story is one!

Really love your work :)

You need to go through this chapter and probably others as well to adjust the animagus Harry has. You changed it to a Nemeon Lion earlier in the book but have yet to correct other chapters you'd already written later

That Umbridge thing is so predictable.
I don't get it. You're a gifted writer, but still you use the main points from the original in your fic. Aren't you able to write something original within the Harry Potter universe?
If this is the same, and obviously now it is, can I predict the rest too?

this is just so bad dude, fuuuck

just letting u know u got the patils mixed up