|Reviews for The Suit of Swords|
| Aldalena chapter 5 . 6/8/2007
Lena: Poor Nagi-kun. He's my favorite Schwarz member.
Hiro: You told me he's the only Schwarz member you like...
Lena: Well, yeah...Schuldig is...I dunno...Crawford gets on my nerves, and Farfarello just creeps me out...
Hiro: Anyway, good chapter.
Lena: Yep, we liked it! It's good Nagi-kun is back!
| Aldalena chapter 4 . 6/8/2007
Lena: Wah, no-
Hiro: Don't say it...
Lena: -_- *Ahem* Good chapter!
Lena: *Voice dripping sarcasm* Geez, Hiro, you're just SO enthusiastic!
Hiro: Well, I'm not a very enthusiastic person... I /do/ like the story, though, so don't worry, I wasn't being sarcastic or anything.
Lena: Muraki's a creepy bastard! _
Hiro: ...That was random...but, yeah, he is.
| Aldalena chapter 3 . 6/8/2007
Lena: Okay, so there's Ken-kun and Yohji-kun...but still no Aya-kun...? Will he be in this story?
Hiro: Stop it with the obsession already...
Lena: Aww, Hiro, you always complain...
Hiro: Well, yeah, you've been reading more Ran fanfics than I can count, and not to mention the numerous pictures you've saved on the computer... -_-
Lena: *Blush* Stop mentioning all that!
Hiro: Whatever, let's just read the next chapter...
Lena: Nice chapter! Even though there's-
Hiro: *Clamps hand over Lena's mouth and clicks the 'Submit Review button'
| Aldalena chapter 2 . 6/8/2007
Lena: Aww, no Ran? Oh well...I guess it's okay.
Hiro (my cousin's nickname): *Sigh* Your obsession with Ran is getting annoying...
Lena: You're always complaining about it! Grr...
Hiro: Well, Yanagi-sen, pretty good so far.
Lena: Yes, it is! It's funny, we just finished watching Yami no Matsuei and Weiss Kreuz a few days ago and Weiss Kreuz Gluhen today; heheh, I liked Ran's character design in Gluhen . *No one heard me say that...*
Lena: Well, on to the next chapter!
| senshixdoukeshi chapter 6 . 8/30/2003
I really enjoyed this story. At first I was afraid that the mingling of the two worlds would be jagged and full of plot holes which, I am quite relieved to say, it wasn't. I agree with your notes. Muraki is more powerful than peopel think and while Schwarz might be able to do some damage you have to remember that Muraki is so manipulative and all of Schwarz has way too easily visible weak points in character and confidence. They just wouldn't stand a chance and Muraki meeting them might just drag them into the line of danger more than necessary. If they even survived the encounter with a man who can call DEMONS which I think Schwarz might have trouble fighting, he might become interested in their powers and end up wanting to experiment on them too, so that ideas a bust. I think that for the sake of things running in a semi-smooth and as causulty free way it's better that they didn't get involved. Get story, hope to read the sequel soon.
| Seraph1 chapter 6 . 6/5/2003
that was wonderful. please write a sequel just no sacrifice!
| Kitty-N2 chapter 6 . 5/4/2003
It was going really good (it is good)... But I was waiting to see a relationship between Nagi and Omi, maybe just a litle more romance.
If you are goning to make a sequel, I will wait for it.
(sorry but I love Nagi and Omi relationship)
| Keimei chapter 6 . 4/5/2003
Whaddya mean it's over? It can't be over! There's still too much to happen! Too much unresolved plot points and a distinct lack of Omi/Nagi shonen-ai. *sits down in is determined to wait for more* _
| sh547 chapter 6 . 4/4/2003
interesting end... a sequel could be done, but you could let it drop there too _ bravo!
| mara-chan chapter 6 . 4/3/2003
oh, what a great story... and you're right, it doesn't seem finished. As for the Seven of Swords, it seems like Omi and Nagi have a budding relationship... what are they going to do about that? Sacrifices are _going_ to have to be made if they want to see each other more. But if you're talking serious sacrifice, I don't really believe that Muraki is just going to let Nagi go. He's gone through Hisoka to get to Tzusuki before, what's st opping him from going through Omi to get to Nagi now? Or one of Schwartz? Well hm, I have a bunch of ideas but I don't want to impose them on you. You probably already have some ideas for a sequel .
| Reilata chapter 6 . 4/2/2003
Haha! Fweet! Sequel would be indeed a good thing. *nodnod* o.o Though I'm wondering how Schwarz reacted to just where Nagi was. ::she waves a mini flag of Watari fandom as she heads off::
| mara-chan chapter 5 . 4/1/2003
aww, that's so sweet. i love the nagixomi pairing. this is coming along great. i'm happy to see there's a new chapter up.
| Rogue chapter 5 . 3/31/2003
CURSE HIM! CURSE HIM! I think it'd be interesting plot-twist not to mention reading about how Schwarz wound react to the fact that Nagi now has the same curse as Hisoka. It'd be even better because of the similarities between the two; both gifted(telekinetic & empathic), the fact that they look and act alike, but Nagi is a brunette with blue eyes and Hisoka is blonde with green eyes. Speaking of which, does Schwarz ever get a glimpse of Hisoka? I'd like to see that! MORE SOON! _
| Keimei chapter 5 . 3/31/2003
Ah, another wonderful angst-filled chapter of Suit of Swords. But this time without much of a cliff-hanger! *sigh* You managed to get some kawaiiness in with all the angst though, like when Omi fed Nagi. And describing Omi sleeping. Kawaii! And this time, I get to add poor Hisoka to my list. Damn that Muraki! *ends review to hunt down scary creepy doctor* _
| Romilly McAran chapter 4 . 3/24/2003
Where the hell is Schwarz? That Weiss wasnt invited I can understand but Schwarz? Schuldig should have a kind of link to Nagi anyway, know his thought pattern. If I was Naoe Id scream in my mind for Schuldig. Chances are that he hears it. The good doctor may be able to handle the Shinigami and Omi but an angry Schwarz team as well? I wouldnt think so! So he got the telekinet of the group but someone who knows your moves before you do, someone who is faster than you can see and read your thoughts and someone who cant feel pain are not to be taken lightly!
Where the hell is Schwarz? Nagi is one of their own!
On the other hand I like the story. The Shinigami are good. I want more!