|Reviews for TRAppED|
| the kid chapter 20 . 11/22/2014
Guaaaaaaa... she still sucks... :I
When is he gonna get his butt into gear and make her do the dare promise? I'd make her stop living in De-nile since it would be the healthiest thing for her near-retarded psychology...
| the kid chapter 10 . 11/22/2014
The last dare on his side should be "no more denial." Man, it would destroy her tiny, value scale-less world! It's too easy for her to stay in delusion-land, or de-nile. She needs to feel an obligation or threat to stay in reality. Fear of "losing" to Spike would be that threat.
| the kid chapter 7 . 11/22/2014
Still in this... and Buffy still sucks major biscuit-hoffer... but I'm into where this is going... :I
Will she ever get over her denial? Heck, I wouldn't be surprised if Buffy was claimed by Angel as a "it's for her own good" measure for her "safety" before he left... :I
| the kid chapter 1 . 11/22/2014
God, I hate Buffy's sanctimonious "i'm better than you" garbage. She says she's better than vamps, but all I see is a successful Drusilla, Drusilla the 2nd, if you will. A perfect creation of Angelus; causes damage to everyone around her because she can't ever be anything but the slayer, but now has a normalcy fetish because her "first love" Angel said she should. God, this girl is STUPID. She built up her identity from her friend's idolizing thoughts, and she thinks nothing will go wrong? Pfft. May she crash and burn, the dumb bimbo.
But her choices are HUMAN and that makes her innately hateable in the way you hate stupid girls who make terrible man decisions, even when you know the whole background of WHY they make those terrible man decisions...! DAMMIT JOSS! Even when the character sucks they're more human than I'd like! :I
NOTE: This means you pretty much got that C#NT's personality right, which is good! I just hate her, and hate how her and Spike's story ended in the show. These story types are hard for me to get through when they start with Miss C#NT doing her "i'm better than you" spiel, but I'm gonna do it. I'm interested where this is going...
| all forms of fluff chapter 53 . 9/23/2014
WOW! At frist this story was all hard edges and dammaging. I just couldn't see how it would end in a good place. I honestly wasn't expecting it to do so. However I like how this ended. A recap of the rest of the series, a brife stint of Angel was just how to end the story. I almost didn't finish it when the two finally got to gether, most of those chapters were spent in bed and being all loving and new. I also liked that you used language to tie into the title, there were lots of "I have to gos."s and "I can't stay"s floating bout that made me feel like the characters felt trapped. In a building or a situation that wanted to get out of or hide from. It was really well written. Thank you for the story.
| Amu4ever chapter 8 . 8/16/2014
Hmm...not much of a romantic then, huh? After all to call feedback the sweetest word...*shakes head*
| Amu4ever chapter 6 . 8/16/2014
Hehehe...spike is so sneaky 3
| Amu4ever chapter 1 . 8/16/2014
Hahaha...I really wonder, what you will make out of this situation...
It has so much potential 3
| Guest chapter 10 . 5/14/2014
OMG love it :D so ... hot and wow :D
| Guest chapter 7 . 5/14/2014
I'm loving it dying to see where it goes, spike it's my favorite character of the show and they are my favorite couple i wish they had end up together... anyway your great 3
Love and Temptations
| ameo66 chapter 53 . 6/5/2013
Honestly, I was overwhelmed by the length simply because of I wasn't sure how much longer I could take them not being together. You pleased me a lot, but some of it seemed over done. Like you did it for the sake of adding length, though course my brain is derped from all the reading, so can't give a specific example...
| ameo66 chapter 25 . 6/3/2013
Alrighty,firstly I have to say that you are special because normally for completed fics, I won't bother to comment until the very end. This ending tothe chapter so subtly delicious though because at first I wasn't sure why I was familiarized with the scene. First some reason you just pulled in just the slight different perspective. Okay, let me finish...
| bip.pib.1 chapter 53 . 3/19/2013
A very touching and beautiful story ... I loved the first chapters, with the banter, and the way you built the love story :-) I was very sad when I came to the last 2 chapters, because you could have done a great job re-writing season 6 and 7. Personally, I'm not such a fan of soulled Spike, and much less of human Spike, I find demon Spike falling inlove and going against his nature in the name of this love best than everything :-) But your story is SPUFFY-TASTIC !
| Guest chapter 20 . 3/17/2013
I absolutely LOVE your story !
Just a little comment, I know you finished it longtime ago, but I think Giles refers to "Wagner-ian snoring", not "Vargnerian", as in Richard Wagner's opera, which is rather strong and loud ...
| cosmiclove chapter 53 . 3/2/2013
You are a goddess of Spuffyness , I love your story!