Reviews for Songbird |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Agh this is such an amazing ff-a really well written story and one of the best I’ve come across on this site about Rhaegar. I especially like the developing relationship between Rhaegar and Elise especially when he’s possessive/jealous lmao (I know its cliche). Rhaegar has always been such an intriguing character and I love the way you've portrayed him-with that exact combination of sadness and fierceness. I know its been a really long time since you’ve updated and probably won’t see this but if you do, please update-you have such talent and it would be a shame not to continue. Pplz plz update xxx |
![]() ![]() ![]() Cool story hope to see more soon |
![]() ![]() ![]() Can't wait to see what happens next so I hope you update again soon plz |
![]() ![]() ![]() Lannister is more crazy than the king if he thinks that Aerys would be willing to have a non-Targaryen queen, when a perfect daughter exists. I can't wait for more! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I adore the story as it is but i trust your new rewrite cause you're an awesome writer, i cant wait to read the new story :) great work! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Disappointed that there aren't more chapters but understand. Hope you return soon. Really enjoy this story and am intrigued with where things will go. Best wishes. |
![]() ![]() ![]() It's amazing how you were able to portray Elise as a beautiful and charming character without making her seem arrogant or cringy and I really love your writing style, it makes me want to read every single word carefully because of how amazing it is. It's one of those stories where you never want the chapter to end. I salute youI'm very much looking forward to your rewrite or update |
![]() ![]() ![]() This story is a goner.."Rewrite" is just a AUTHORS way of SAYING.."I'm done, can't do it, the story is abandoned" etc etc..It's an excuse. |
![]() ![]() Twin is out of his mind if he thinks Aerys will allow his daughter to marry Jamie. She was made for Rhaegar. |
![]() ![]() If you want to make it more exiting do not show every side of the story focus on one character or tho characters. Maybe some one timers like elises grandfather, in the prologue. My suggestion focus on Aerys or someone close to him and Elise. |
![]() ![]() How does Rhaegar know Cersei? The books don't say much of it. |
![]() ![]() It was a intresting story OP! I always wondered if Aerys had any bastards since he is said to be lecherous. Maybe Aerys had his mistresses use prevention? I wonder what Elise's future can be? I don't think she can make a big impact without using other people with more wealth, more power, more influence, more respect. To me Elise has more to lose by involving herself with Jaime than to gain, her safest bet would be to just marry Rhaegar. Maybe she can change her understanding of vengeance? It probably is better for her to focus on a quiet, boring life. I wonder how Aerys, Rhaella, Tywin knew Elise's mother? If Elise is going to get intrested in Jaime, will we get to know the age difference? What will drive Elise toward Jaime, and Jaime toward Elise? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Thanks for the note! I’ll be here :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm quite curious to see the rewrite. I already adore this story and I'm anxiously waiting to see what happens next! Hopefully there will be no problems in the future with Lyanna, but the more direct problem seems to by Cersei and Tywin. I can't wait to read more! |