Reviews for Fate Zero: Sword's Redemption |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Merry Christmas! Thank you for the chapter! _ Critique: It's all good except for ONE THING that needs changing: Kiritsugu Emiya does NOT have a Reality Marble. Instead what happens when he uses his mage-craft is the speeding up or slowing down of time. Depending on how he uses it, his body, his perspective, or that of some object of his immediate designation will. Thats not a Reality Marble, so tou need to edit out that bit and replace the words with something else that fits what he is REALLY doing. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nice... Finally found a rare good interpretation of why gil id the way he is. Tis is very rare, most people would just assume his an arrogant ass |
![]() ![]() ![]() I wonder how long it'll take for caster to realize he and shiro are not that different |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ehh, I don't understand why others try to keep things as cannon as possible and following the rules of magecraft when type moon breaks them and deviates cannon all the time |
![]() ![]() ![]() I won't lie, three chapters in and I can tell that this will be amazing |
![]() ![]() ![]() Let's just say, I wouldn't bet on Lancer. Thanks for the chapter! |
![]() ![]() ![]() im hoping to see some character development with both shirou’s |
![]() ![]() in fate zero nerf Instinct of arturia, she should not have been injured by laser and beat him easily |
![]() ![]() ![]() What like 5 Star Saber vs 3 star lancer. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I don't have problem with how fights in this fic! Just make sure you treat shirou better! This E rank luck kid really need some love since grail is corrupted and can't be used to revive his parent |
![]() ![]() ![]() Rider looking around making Caster nervous was nice scene. I wonder how Riders will use slip up about master identity. Do Shirou was affected by seeing UBW. Honestly better now than in middle of battle. So far you are following canon events for Kiritsugu but it build mood and if you change it well it will not be a problem at all. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I loved the chapter. It was a nice cool down from the last one. I’m interested in Rider trying to find out more about Caster, but I’m even more interested in what will happen to Shirou. |
![]() ![]() ![]() A good respite chapter. I'm looking for the next. But I want to ask you about just a thing not relative about this chapter. Many fan writers exalt Kariya and demonize Tokiomi. In reality i don't like nobody of them: Kariya in the canon is very vain and he is conviced to be the only one to know the truth about everyone( he is conviced Aoi loves him and he wants kill Tokiomi to rob his family as father at some point:it'noymt very altruistic) About Tokiomi:while his decision about Sakura was horrendous, he didn't know about the real objective of Zouken and he wanted save Sakura from a Sealing Designation,where she probably would have been Nasu said Rin inherted the kindness from him:he cannot be so bad in that way. The fic is yours and it's already awesome,but can you highlights the hidden sides of those characters? If you don't believe, go to tv tropes for page of characters of Fate/zero Ps during the banquet of kings, could Caster reveal abot the true objective of the Grail to Archer amd Saber,as done with Rider? He could mess with them and their masters and so plant chaos in the meanwhile, advantaging himself |
![]() ![]() ![]() Love the chapter. Can we see Kiritsugu and Kirei die? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Heh, yeah this was awesome! Loved the outcome of the Caster and Rider fight. And I now wonder what Rider thinks of Kariya's honestly "simple but stupid" mistake in the aftermath before he departed there. Can't wait to see the outcomes of the three other concurrent fights, especially with the further canon divergence. I'm kind hoping they catch Kirei in a pincer attack between everyone else and wombo combo him lol. But surely Assassin or Archer might back him up in such an..."unfortunate" event. But what I'm most curious about is how Shirou witnessing Unlimited Blade Works has affected his infant Reality Marble and jump started and accelerated it's completion process at an exponential growth rate. And that underwater-ish scene he's stuck in seems like when Saber is sucked into the Black Grail and meets Saber Alter. It also looks like the opening intro scene of Fate Stay Night where the 9 Servants are standing and floating on top of what looks like an ocean surface or could be the Throne of Heroes or inside the Holy Grail. And if in the UBW nd HF route, the only scene Gilgamesh wears his armour and has his hair spiked up like normal. Anyways, Shirou up has clearly did himself that in that ocean like space, he witnessed Caster's past after that information was all forcibly injected into his mind and body painfully. This just means to me that hell suddenly experi3nce a jump in his ability to perform Magecraft that only Shirou EMIYA can manage splendidly so. It will be like he's Caster Lily in combat lol! Imagine that! Caster Lily! So with Caster as his Mentor he's more likely to go a Castoria route where he has expanded arsenal of Magecraft by the time he's as old as his FSN self and Caster self huh... In a way, Caster is unwittingly responsible for creating a Shirou that becomes a Caster instead of an Archer had he not intervened, huh... Fascinating, very fascinating! |