Reviews for Fate Zero: Sword's Redemption |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Well then, a cockroach is back, a new potential master is in the game and a cup lives another day. Fantastic shapter, thanks for not getting too deep in the smut-like descriptions, you did fine with how you went about it here. Good work! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Sola-Ui still "loves" Lancer even after the Love Spot curse should be dispelled with his death just like his Anti-heal curse was dispelled on Saber? Shouldn't it be like that? Shouldn't it be as if Sola-Ui has awoken from a dream and realised how artificial her "love" for Lancer was? In confused... Poor office lady... And from her perspective Gil almost seems like pitying Samaritan. But I can understand your logic of how Gil saving her would mean he would have to save everyone. It's impossible as we've seen from Kiritsugu 's "Hero of Justice" story arc as painfully taught to him by the Black Grail. So in a way your portrayal of Gilgamesh's mindset in regards to the office lady at least, mirrors a version of Kiritsugu and Archer EMIYA who have given up on saving everyone because that wish is impossible, especially since it requires you conversely wishing for people to be in danger in the first place as Kirei points out. So in a way Kirei points out how wishing to save everyone can be perverted into "wishing EVERYONE was IN danger, so that YOU can SAVE them". That is to say... It's a very selfish wish and ALL wishes, no matter how born of altruism they are, are all selfish and greedy... Fascinating, very fascinating ~! I feel like I finally understand FSN Kirei now... Especially when he says "Rejoice boy! Your wish (to save everyone by requiring that everyone be in danger so only YOU can save them) will be (fulfilled?)". I wonder how the Sola-Ui Master arc will go now that she can form a new contract with a new Servant. I wonder if she will go as far as stealing a Servant or acting in secret and summoning a new Servant. Or maybe she will secretly ally herself with any Master and act in secret much in the way Kirei had to pretend Assassin was dead, since no one expects her to be a Master... But still, poor office lady... Isn't it sad though... |
![]() ![]() ![]() i need bleach to clean my brain |
![]() ![]() ![]() La situación no lo ameritaba, pero en un futuro saber hablará con su maestro. Se nota claramente que no esta felíz con todo lo que sucedió. Como será esa charla entre arturia y kiritsugu? Al final la victoria de kiritsugu sobre kayneth fue lo que terminó salvando las vidas de irisviel y miya, kirei no pudo terminar lo que comenzó. Supongo que ahora les toca reagruparse y planificar sus movimientos a futuro, la guerra aún continua. Sola ui tiene los sellos de comando de kayneth? Eso significa que puede ser maestra en la guerra por el grial? Parece que matou zouken volvió a las sullas. Pobre chica, el destino le jugó una mala pasada. Con este nuevo cuerpo zouken tratará de volver a su antiguo poder. Se vengara de caster? Volverá por sakura y kariya? Gran capítulo, nos vemos y cuídate mucho. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Zouken being Zouken is just so disgusting I actually gagged a bit there. XD I see Sola-Ui is now the wild card as a possible Master for another Masterless Servant. Either that or resummon Lancer as an Alter variant. In any case, things should be amping up for Caster to deal with later. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I’m a bit upset that Sola-Ui got command spells. I thought Kiritsugu took the hand that had them. I think that Kiritsugu also proved that he was right in speeding along the fight between Lancer and Saber, Saber should also see that, because Irisviel and Miaya would have died. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Thanks for the chapter keep up the great work I can tell we’re slowly getting closer to the fight I’m waiting for with Archer(or Caster now) Vs Kiritsugu |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ah, also, forgot to add some predictions, but- I assume Sola-Ui made a contract with Avenger itself like Bazett had in her own grief over her death. Between Lancer and Sola's rage, it's notice ought to have been drawn. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I would have preferred if you hadn't been so blatant about her being the one Gilgamesh predicted the death of. I got that right away, and it does feel like it takes away from that when the story then goes and outright says it. The vns have a lot of small references and callbacks/setups that aren't directly stated, but the attentive few can notice on the first time and most on retreads. That said, the chapter was good. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Good chapter |
![]() ![]() ![]() Poor Sola and Iri. At least they both have some compensation. And Zouken really is a cockroach. Keep it up! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Will sola-ui be summoning a new lancer or will she try to take one of the current servants. If she does summon a servant I would like to see how she responds to summoning Fionn or maybe a alter diarmuid she summons in despair, the possibilities are endless. Can't wait to see how shirou's doing and how he's handling having the future experiences of EMIYA crammed into his head and the possible awakening of his reality marble. I wonder how his personality is going to change from seeing his possible future and see how he adobts some of Casters mannerisms along with the experience boost in his magecraft that comes along with experiencing his memories. Him and Caster are gonna need to have a long conversation after he wakes up. Can't help but wonder if we will see shirou go up against any masters in the war maybe snipe one of the unsuspecting masters or go up against any arrogant masters who underestimates him because he's a child. Side note- poor sakura having to deal with shirou's endless insanity along with trying to comfort him and failing badly. Hopefully will get more sakura and shirou bonding in future chapters. Kariya deserves a happy ending being able to take care of sakura and fulfill his promise, he always dies in every other fanfiction he atleast deserves happiness in this one. |
![]() ![]() ![]() wtf zouken |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like it Sola-Ui's rage and the progressive return on the game of the old worm... I don't understand just a thing: Sola-Ui was recognized as Master, but she can create a contract only with one of the actual Servants: she can't summon a new one. Is she going to rob one to the one of the other Masters? Until the next time Keep up the good work |
![]() ![]() ![]() God. Here comes the part where the servants start dropping like flies. |