You are killing me with these jokes dude. Such comedic timing is gold. I'll write a longer review later, but I cannot let this joke pass without a mention.

"What does the Fox say?"

Pathetic really Pathetic

I like the twist you put on this. It seems like Naruto will survive with the 9 biju in him as he should have in the first place.

Zeus just fu*ked up

It's funny that when Naruto defeats monsters he gets loot drops like in a video games.

I wonder if the biju will save Naruto? I have read fanfics where Kuruma or the rest of the biju merge themselves with Naruto giving him their power and immortality at the cost of their lives. I know they will do something drastic to save Naruto.

I call bullshit. He received the power from the sage of 6 paths and with that a permanent affinity with all primary elements as well as multiple kekkei genkai. He literally inherited the sage body by being the reincarnation of Ashura. This is forced and retarded plot that you are making just to add some drama and angst to kill Naruto off.

Your unintelligent bullshit you created that is slowly killing Naruto off because of the Biju is uncalled for.

I doubt Naruto would loose in a fight against a God full power. He is techniquely a psudo-God AND he has the power of 9 other God-like beings in him.

This fight with Artemis was fun though.

Another thing. Even if he is mortal, he should have crazy strong vitality by being an Uzumaki, having the power of 9 biju within him(ten tails jinchuuriki) and the power of a god. He should be able to live hundreds of years no problem and age extremely slow.

The way you gave the Biju jobs is pretty neat. These Biju are awesome! I love how you made their characters and how you make them interact with Naruto and the others.

Amazin 10/10

This story should be titled "the sage who steamrolls all the Canon PJO events by himself while saving the damsels (Percy/Thalia/huntresses) from distress that their Canon selves never would have ran into." Enjoying the story but I feel like it had potential to be more.

How TF the mist explain a giant ass demon? Would it even bother hiding Naruto? He's not Greek?

When the symbol appears above their heads, what differentiates the symbols between champion and offspring?

Not my type of story. Don't know if it's just me but when you add Narutogrammar issuesfemale characters, you get something truly annoying to read. Can't do this sorry.

This shit makes me cringe

Absolute awareness, you are aware that Naruto is pretty much the best sensor in the series right? He can predict attacks before they happen and has Light Speed Reaction Time, against these monster he shouldn't have to make the Bijuu look out for him.

The glaring flaw in this Fic is Naruto and seemingly Kurama's big mouths, say what you will but they can keep secrets. Yet everytime a conversation comes up he accidentaly or even willingly gives up information about himself. Not to mention how he is always collapsing and fainting from exhaustion after EVERY GOD DAMN FIGHT! Your reasons for it are bull shit as well, not used to using powerful techniques in ages, he just got done fighting a war not long ago. He has no issues holding their Chakra as shown in the war itself either.

Don't have a clue what you were thinking!