I wonder if he can morph into tailed beast form now...

Nice start.

Whats the name of the sequel, Your work is amazing, Please keep it up

good

fun fact: Madara did his taijutsu flex completely BLIND! no ocular power needed

U do realize he doesn't have to carry the whole team EVERY time? Freakin Artemis just let a man save her and take on monsters sje could fight barehanded. wdym she was weapon less? She can either create one or summon her bow. *sigh*

*Sigh* Thought we were going for the god among men but it's only super Camper

Part 31plzzz

Really sad the story was not continued like you said but I hope you are all right

this story was pretty cool until this super sexist part where naruto goes on a tangent about how women have it worse then men but let's be honest as a man you recieve less love and affection your 4 to 5 times more likely to get murdered at an early age more likely to go to jail and for a longer length of time compared to women your more likely to commit suicide and if your american since women can vote and not be put into the draft technically women have more rights then men in our country not to say that women lives are amazing risk of sexual assault is a big issue but it's one of the only really big issues women face today where I just listed five off the top of my head for men I know someone might read this and say that I'm sexist but I'm not I truly believe in equality among genders but modern day feminist aren't fighting for feminism or any form of equality or they would also be fighting the issues that men face

That was genius making Pan a pervert, I swear an image of a Jiraiya troll meme face popped into my head, they must be having one heck of a time up in the giant bath house in the sky.

Update this

Still re-reading every now and then

Not bad or so so.