Reviews for Harry Potter and the Heritage of the Snake
ProfMoony chapter 33 . 7/4/2021
That game was written amazingly well, far better than JKR could do. Other than the fact they are chasers not hunters. Nice to see Harry adding to his legend in a way that has nothing to do with Voldemort.
ProfMoony chapter 17 . 7/4/2021
You sure love smashed eggs. I've never even heard that term before. Great story though.
David Fishwick chapter 38 . 11/23/2020
Brilliant idea and thanks for writing as I enjoyed reading this story. I thought that it was a nice twist that Selwyn was related to Salazar Slytherin. I liked how you wrote the relationship between Harry and Ginny in this story.
Alice chapter 38 . 8/23/2020
I loved this story and almost cried on the last chapter. By far the best HP fanfiction I have read so far. This is what was missing on the original books, a lovely goodbye to Hogwarts and all the characters we love. Thank you for writing this.
EffBO94 chapter 38 . 6/8/2020
"I apologise in advance for my boring speech" funniest line lol McGonagall letting out her inner Dumbeldore lmao
and Ron's "you failed everything" was brilliant too she deserved that lol we all hate it when smart people act like they've failed an exam when it's obvious to everyone else that they passed easily lmao

brilliant last chapter, loved all three speeches, for once Harry gets to take a backseat lol bet he loved that

loved what you did with Harry and Ron's NEWTs as well , despite what a lot of ppl apparently seem to think Ron is NOT stupid he was just coasting lol Harry was too ofc lmao always thought they both had it in them to excel if they properly applied themselves you did all of the Golden Trio justice with the NEWTS imo (would've liked to see Neville's NEWTs too even if we all know he got an O in Herbology at the very least lol)

ngl i couldn't help but notice a few words here and there that didn't make sense to me - "Ginny and Ron shrugged slightly as they understood", "shrugged so hard he overturned his tea" these really confused me lol, did you mean to write shook? - but still it didn't put me off at all, this is a seriously great story that I favourited after chapter 1 without thinking twice, and i'm deffo gonna read your sequel
EffBO94 chapter 37 . 6/8/2020
the absolute perfect place to hide the Elder Wand, never would've thought of that, that's seriously clever haha
EffBO94 chapter 33 . 6/8/2020
what a game
EffBO94 chapter 30 . 6/8/2020
this is turning into one hell of a debut Hogwarts Memorial day lmao
EffBO94 chapter 25 . 6/8/2020
i was feeling kinda sorry for Bagman, then you reminded me that he cheated the twins out of all their savings and my sympathy completely vanished lol
EffBO94 chapter 23 . 6/8/2020
deaf fingers? think you meant numb fingers lol
EffBO94 chapter 16 . 6/7/2020
Harry's dealing with loss better's sad cause while harsh it's true, he kinda IS used to it by now, he's been losing people since he was just a 1 year old baby... he could've turned out a lot more bitter than he actually was I've always had such respect for his mental fortitude in the books,and i'm getting the same vibe here, you write his character well, the other characters too, really enjoying this story so far
EffBO94 chapter 15 . 6/7/2020
Harry being a noble git again lol how was Williamson's death possibly his fault lmao good thing Ginny talked some sense into him...feel bad for him tho, Voldermort's dead but Harry's still seeing bodies murdered by his Death Eaters, that has to be more draining than anything
EffBO94 chapter 8 . 6/7/2020
"i actually don't really need it" if I were Harry i'd keep the thing on me at all times as a spare at the least, prob. even fight with it, using another wand would make my spells more powerful right? i suppose there'd be a drawback of being tired more easily due to more magic being used than normal but it's still worth it, especially with a wand who's allegiance is now mine... i mean didn't Harry blast Greyback all the way into the ceiling with multiple wands in book 7 lol
EffBO94 chapter 1 . 6/7/2020
this was great, Mr and Mrs Dursley deserved that and more, especially Petunia, i'll never get over how badly she treated her own nephew like that - her own sister's child! smh...but yh I'm liking this story just 'cause of this chapter alone lol
Guest chapter 38 . 4/11/2020
I'm glad you decided to start posting a sequel or else I'd never have found this story. I've really enjoyed your storytelling and characterisation. It's been a really good read.
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