Lol, bravo hippie Jiraya what a groovy idea.

in this chapter things started to go downhill, sorry

I burst out laughing on the 'She's a pedo' part

This is a great story so far. I hope you continue writing this story at some point in the future.

I will forever wonder if we will ever get the next chapter.

hahaha haha

well, yours is certainly an interesting story that actually mixes in "common sense". and yeah, common sense never is very common. In any case, I would like to use your story as reference material and also snag some of the examples for use in a story I am working on.. btw, you should be able to PM me.

This a great fanfic and I really hope that it is continued.

Pls update i'm getting quite thrilled for the next chapter

I am so looking forward to your next chapter. You have a gift for capturing the perfect balance of humor and action that makes Naruto such an awesome anime. I particularly love how your fight scenes are wonderfully choreographed but not a boring blow by blow rehash of canon battles. Even better, they don't drag on for page upon page until the reader just wants to hit the fighters over the head to get it done. You have given me fresh insight into the narutoverse. Thank you. It's writers like you that make fanfic worth reading.

This story is one of my all-time favorite fics. Common Sense is my motto. Great stuff. Can't wait to see Naruto break out the big moves in the next chapter

That's not what substitution does at all, you donut. It's not space-time ninjutsu. If it were, NOBODY would be able to master it.

Kishimoto explains it in one of the earliest chapters of the manga. The user targets an object nearby and propels himself to that location, similar to a Shunshin. Likewise, the object in question is propelled to the user's direction, creating the optical illusion of the user being struck, since the Shunshin is practically invisible to the naked eye.

It is NOT this bastardized bullshit. What the FUCK made you think it was a good idea to turn the Substitution into a Space-Time ninjutsu? You do realize Academy students are expected to perform it, right? It's been long established that one needs to understand the intricacies of a jutsu before he tries to perform it. It was true when Sasuke was learning the fireball, when Naruto was learning the Rasengan, and when Sakura was learning the Mystical Palm (that was a anime filler, but the point still stands). You realize that, right? Do you really think motherfucking Konohamaru would understand jack shit about the space-time continuum?

I get that this story is supposed to be crack, but your story is far too pretentious for my tastes.

update?

So, over-powered protagonist stories are usually pretty boring after the first couple of chapters. You’ve managed to side-step the problem of having basically no tension about the outcome, with strong humor. Enjoyed the read. Subscribing.

I really hope you are still alive. With the way 2021 has gone and that its been over a year since you updated it seems a valid concern. I'd usually check to see if an author has some recent additions to their favorites but you don't have any so that is out, so I am left hoping this review reaches you and prompts a new chapter seeing as this is an amazing fic and really needs to continue.