|Reviews for Lonely in Your Nightmare|
| Guest chapter 40 . 8/22
What I didn't liked about the story , it annoyed me a lot that it was always Bella who was bending over backwards to accommodate Edward and his son . She is the who always has to make sacrifices . Honestly I think she derves better. I was so jealous of Alice , cause she had a more romantic partner compared to Bella's , it always seemed like Edward was trying to find a mother for his son than a romantic partner . I didn't care for him at all , he was so annoying throughout the story that I just wanted Bella to say "thank u next". The hippocrassy is so annoying , if normally Bella have a child it always seems like she didn't have a life outside of her child , no romantic propositions for her . Her child is always made out to be a baggage by any of her romantic prospects but here women are all around throwing themselves at him and Bella is making all these sacrifices just so she could be with him . Its so annoying , personally I didn't saw anything special in him .
| levityoflonging chapter 9 . 8/2
I'm sorry, but this story is painful to read so far. Bella is being such a pick me girl. He has flat put said he doesn't want anything to do with her. It's cringe worthy that she keeps putting herself in his path. This Edward doesn't even seem to be attracted to her. Just leave the man be.
| Messy Bronze Hair chapter 11 . 7/29
Nooo I can’t! Your Bella is so pushy. Really don’t like her at all
| Messy Bronze Hair chapter 6 . 7/29
Okay, so this is so wrong on so many levels. He was obviously drunk. Why the hell did she even have sex with him? She should have backed off the moment he decided to kiss her. I feel like that Bella took advantage of Edward, and then she had the nerve to act offended. The whole thing with over sharing with her friends is also something I don’t like. Feels like Bella is making Edward private life all public. But she crossed a major line with the whole sex thing. I hope she backs off now and give Edward some space
| RoseArcadia chapter 40 . 3/29
Hi! I read this story a few years ago, because I was attracted to the title being a Duranie. And I came across it again recently, realizing that I never left you a review. So I reread it, and I still absolutely love how realistic and patient this story is. It doesn't jump into things, it doesn't go off on an unrealistic tangent, it's just real people living their lives through tragedy and hope. It's such a beautiful story, and of course I absolutely adore all of the chapter titles as well! Thank you.
| Zveka chapter 40 . 2/19
Great story; love it
| Guest chapter 40 . 2/12
Enjoyed this story
| Elle Whitecap chapter 40 . 2/4
Loved this story!
| Patty T chapter 40 . 1/26
Adorable historia! Gracias x compartir
| LillianBroderick chapter 40 . 1/12
That was lovely. Thank you
| Dollybigmomma chapter 33 . 1/8
My SIL died last spring at 53, leaving behind a large, beautiful home and a heap of nice assets. Two and a half weeks later, a woman from their church starts coming around and being all "friendly." One month to the day of the funeral, my brother posts on Facebook that he's "in a relationship" with her. Then 51 days after his wife's death he announces they're engaged. Five months to the day after the funeral was their wedding. I'm not sure what was worse, the obvious dollar signs in her eyes or my brother's refusal to see them. Yeah, anything sooner than a year is highly inappropriate, and any person who pushes for things to move faster is suspicion in my book.
| Barbell21 chapter 24 . 8/31/2020
Good for Bella to have some self preservation! I completely understand and agree she did the right thing.
| Barbell21 chapter 6 . 8/31/2020
Ugh I didn’t like this chapter at all. First of all, Bella shouldn’t have had sex with him since he was DRUNK. He had almost 2 six packs! Second of all, she needs to back off and her friends are giving her bad advice. Terrible. He’s grieving and he had sex with her when he thought it was his wife. She definitely needs to leave him alone unless he comes to her. She needs to stop throwing herself at him for the sake of their “friendship”.
| MyPseudonyms chapter 40 . 8/26/2020
Great story !
| MissWM chapter 40 . 8/11/2020
I have to confess i thought you'd make a big deal out of the fact that bree's murder weapon was never found. I don't know, it felt like maybe you were hinting that there were too many loose gaps.
And bella, at the beginning, sort of annoyed me. Her whole approach, I don't know. It just got to me... i don't know if i can put it into words
Anyways, this was a very nice story. And masen was just way too cute. Thanks for sharing.