Well I can say, I'd like to see what happens next.. But given it's Zabuzza.. It's kinda funny, that naruto can just "go fox" and turn him into confetti... But it's still pretty cool. Maybe that would put a "fire under the 'adults' asses, to get them back there"... Also kinda makes me WONDER why BOTH jounnin needed to go to bridge when there is only ONE jounnin to fight.. Are the leaf really THAT weak?... Shouldn't they have AT least left a "clone" or something to watch over the kids, that they are RESPONSIBLE for? I somehow don't think the hokage would be too happy with kakkashi if sasuke got killed, because BOTH cat and kakkashi went off and let them be ALL alone with the family of the client... (I say sasuke because he's the only one of the group STUPID enough to rush in, and WEAK enough not to be able to do anything, to save himself from the repercussions of "rushing in")

Honestly? I really like this one, I hope you continue. The characters are quite a bit more "fleshed out" then in most. So, VERY good job.

Considering they HAVE an entire clan of mind walkers... AND anbu that can do the same tricks? YES, the hokage COULD make the ENTIRE village "FORGET" that naruto has the kyuubi in him! So don't use silly sayings like "what would you have me do? Go back in time and correct every mistake I've made?" This is BEFORE you get into the time vortexes and seals that ACTUALLY do send people back in time (the lost tower movie)... So yeah, in their WORLD? That IS in fact, a VIABLE option. Oh and if NONE of either of those things? Then QUIT MAKING MORE MISTAKES!

I always thought it was VERY stupid that everybody thinks sasuke should be the ninjutsu specialist, since naruto has exponentially larger amounts of chakra... HE should be the one that is spamming jutsu... He's a LIVING CHAKRA BATTERY, having him do anything ELSE, is kinda dumb... Even canon SCREWS that up IMO... But shonen jump characters OFTEN do that... "Give the main character TONS of chakra and then having him go around getting his knuckles bruised from PUNCHING people"... BRILLIANT *rolls eyes*... "Give the main character INCREDIBLE amounts of spiritual power and pressure, off the scale... and have him just hack people/things up with a sword"(bleach).. Another great attempt at STUPIDITY! *rolls eyes again*..

Actually, it's a misunderstood fact about the sharinggan can "control" the bijuu... It actually CAN'T... It CAN send them into "uncontrolled bloodlust"... It can make them LOSE their minds... NOT actually just command them... Just like Senju's gift, is just "soothing a bijuu".. as in, it lulls them into a semi-passive state... But again, it doesn't actually CONTROL them. Those little pieces of information usually get forgotten and "jumbled" by authors. Seems to me having two individuals on naruto's team that can only make naruto FLIP OUT WORSE in anger.. Is a LITTLE DUMB... Tsunade "fixes" things by replacing kakashi with yammato.. But those initial missions were just BRAIN DEAD... Team, teacher... Everything about them... I wonder if kishimotto was deciding if NARUTO would leave the village, or go on a minor killing spree... Considering all the bad decisions. Until he settled on a standard "everyone's behavior changed and nobody remembers how it was".

Was the barrier thing a reference to Orihime Power in Bleach? Santen Kesshun, I think. Only reason I am guessing is because
he says "reject" in the end. Btw, actually enjoyed the story alot.

Hm, Naruto having a crush on Yugao, maybe? Or perhaps on Haku? Lol

Please continue this story. It is so good.

So far, I like this. I just hope that Yami can be wrong at some point because if she is always right, then it would get boring. at least to me. she isn't all seeing. she is his negative emotions that are hidden. emotions aren't always logical.

Is that the fucking tri-force!?

this is pretty good. I look forward to seeing how Naruto grows from the wave arc this time. :)

That was so cool! I really want to see what happens next. I am looking forward to the next chapter. Keep up the great work!

Wow. This is a very interesting concept and I wouldn’t mind seeing this play out

Nice, but uh Fishcake and Dragon update anytime soon?

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Looking forward to Chapter 8.