Reviews for Myth
Unsubtle2 chapter 5 . 6/21/2005
"Oh, so he can't roll away, or get stepped on, or anyting like that."

Legolas frowned. "He can roll away?"

"I don't know. Maybe."

You're really not portraying such a great mother here. Why wouldn't she have someone take care of the baby instead of putting it in a /box/? They can't afford a cradle? And in case you didn't know, the moment a baby rolls over is a big deal. Mothers usually mark that kind of event on their calenders, get excited, etc. I would suggest maybe thinking through these kind of things a little more... maybe talk to some people who are actually mothers or do a little research. Then again, you may be purposefully going for the dangerously inexperienced and irresponsible mother character, in which case I'm sorry for misunderstanding your story.
Jaded Atticus chapter 6 . 12/20/2004
fabulous. i really like this one. its was so deep. yay legolas!
Annoyed Tolkienite chapter 1 . 9/30/2004
A rating of over PG-13 does not constitute a good story. R and NC-17 are just as full of crap as G, PG and PG-13.


Just add two w's for instant sporkage.
BritneyK chapter 5 . 9/28/2004
Wow, I really wanna hear what happens! But... you haven't updated for a while, i don't think you're going to. Sad.
princessaudra chapter 3 . 6/30/2003
omg! why aren't you updateing!
tamara chapter 5 . 6/3/2003
mememe chapter 5 . 5/14/2003
no more kids, the first one if enuf for now and hurry up with it!
Daisy Princess chapter 5 . 5/8/2003
Keep writing, please, this is awesome! I can't wait. Now, I can't speak for Myth, but if I got to marry the yummy elf... I would want more kids! Well, maybe I'd just wanna- well nevermind! :-)
tamara chapter 5 . 5/8/2003
good chapter! i don't think she should want kids right away, but i think legolas can persuade her. ;) lol. please update soon!
I WANT TO GO AWAY NOW chapter 5 . 5/8/2003
Hi, I'm one of the ones who stopped reading...


...but I'm glad to know you're back. And hey, if you're busy, you're busy. Don't sweat it. All that matters is that you've updated, and that makes me smile. :)


tamara chapter 3 . 4/2/2003
thins is a really good story! plez update soon! u'r doing a really good job writting this!
I WANT TO GO AWAY NOW chapter 3 . 3/31/2003
I was so into your story; I still am...but when you took forever to update, I just stopped checking and checking and checking and checking...until finally, I gave up hope and took you off my favourite stories list...

I'm sorry... :C

Anyway, hope you update more often!
static-lullaby chapter 3 . 3/27/2003
I like the plot. But all i have to say is. PARAGRAPHS! you need to fix the format. Overall it is pretty good. ~ princess of mirkwood
Peppermint187 chapter 3 . 3/27/2003
i like this story its good...i especially like Myth's attitude!
anonymous chapter 3 . 3/27/2003
good. continue
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