Reviews for Endless Pantheon: God's Blood |
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![]() ![]() Ah, one of the things where ivysage shows. A more experienced archive could have determined it needed proof first and done it beforehand, ND all of this wouldn't have happened... |
![]() ![]() Truly, you should send these to Butcher. An animated series of your books would be fantastic. |
![]() ![]() I wonder how OG Harry would react if H These days were sent to him as a totally real seeming dream. Hehe... |
![]() ![]() He is obviously the only ki d of evil. God worth knowing. Connery if he was a gumshienwizard agent of his majesty. |
![]() ![]() Even on a re read, knowing how long this will go, this is a situation where you are in shock and terror of. Harrys future. |
![]() ![]() A start almost as good on the zero to over 9000 shitometer as Changes. Yoi Rock. |
![]() ![]() ![]() "Did you disengage the landing gear?" Got some mad Elite vibes there lmao |
![]() ![]() ![]() Kinda want Dresden to play hardball one of these days. Like "oh so you're threatening my brother, fine. I won't interfere. My brother is strong, he will fight, he may live, he may die. But then what bitch." Y'know, act the part of a callous king-god or something. I know it won't happen, it goes against his entire character, but just once, I want him to risk those he loves- to show he will not so easily be cowed. Not that he's a pushover or anything, but he's hopeless against certain things- which is part of his charm I guess. I'm not criticising the chapter in any way shape or form, just being irritated at Mab on Harry's behalf I guess. |
![]() ![]() ![]() You know, I had forgotten how good both this fix and the first one are. You have a real talent for both characterization and for explaining how and why those characters change. Please keep writing, I will certainly keep reading |
![]() ![]() ![]() clarent, not clerent |
![]() ![]() ![]() "No I conceded, I do not", requires two more quotation marks. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I actually feel bad for Koschei |
![]() ![]() Oooh, there is so much cool stuff going on in this story! Thank you so very, very much for writing and continuing this story - I enjoyed every bit of it. :) |
![]() ![]() The bunny is AWESOME. And thank you for this chapter! :D |
![]() ![]() So, koschei, father of ghuos, created from wraith and other stuff? Nice touch. Too short chpwter though. Let's hope. You continue soon. |