Reviews for Gravity Falls: Once More |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I’m really starting to like Derrick and Ryland. THIS is how you write three-dimensional OCs. Not through voices-of-reason whose temper tantrums are ALWAYS justified in some way, but by having them make stupid choices that are ACTUALLY CALLED OUT! I know I’m definitely rooting for Mabel and Ryland. They just seem so perfect for each other. As for Derrick, his constant denial was annoying, but at least his actions were called out and he’s starting to improve himself. |
![]() ![]() ![]() A guy named SuperSonicBros123 told me about your story in a review for my Gravity Falls fic, One Cruel Summer (check it out if you're curious). Well, I finally started reading this, and it's off to a great start. Can't wait to see what's in store for Dipper, Mabel, Derrick and the rest of the gang. |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Okay, the flashback to that dance and Dipper hanging with Derrick is nice. But with the mention of PLATINUMPAZ, I hope that we see Pacifica's secret discovered by Dipper. All that artwork Mabel made sounds awesome and I can see her making it in the series. But with what happened and that ending, let's see what happens next. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Quite a lot of Wild West action! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Can't wait to see Blendin again! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Sweet! Wild West time travel arc! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm really happy to see this fic again! Definitely one heck of an adventure that Dipper and Pacifica were in that added to their dynamic and the shipping. But looks like the government spooks are getting more involved because of what Fraid saw. I'm sure that they'll get in over their heads when some of the local strangeness doesn't want them around. |
![]() ![]() Going from Caesar to Atbash this time |
![]() ![]() ![]() Welp I love most of the story, but com'on don't make it a Dipcifica story. He does so much better with Wendy. The one that works the best with Paz is Mabel. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Sigh i genuently give your fanfic a chance to see if it could get better but nope now we have even MORE character you ingored Firstly the "squid": It was introduced in like 1 or 2 full chapter early on and just basically fall off the planet earth like goddamn even Waddle is treated better in the main series and what i think you introduced it just for 1 singular moment. Then "Derrick": Is there a more annoying character you introduce like goddamn he still a citch after all of that and Mabel still doesnt like him and we never get to explore it. The "Mystery Shack dept" : THis plot line i thought would be introduce after Ford and Stanley have return but nope it never FUCKING happend like i guess there still some chapter left but what kind of epilouge is that? A terrible one that was. And "Robbie" : Ok Robbie was still a jerk all this time and he cant hold his girlfriend but all im saying is...Why? Like why do Robbie story need this? He doesnt learn by the end anything meaningful and RObbie wasnt valuable to the story beside "zodiac" so why the hell did you did him dirty like that? And lastly the most neglected MAIN character of the series "STANLEY": SIgh...where the fuck do i begin like what the hell? You probally already read my last review so i will just continue here Stanley barely did anything beside being a "plot device" he gone out with them to get the ingredient but he only whine and whine and he doesnt helpmuch in the hive beside being possessed by Bill yet again, after that he then got possessed by Bill AGAIN to attack Ford and he was only there to make Soos doubt himself and even said that Stan doesnt view him as son(WTF? This never get addressed again and im supposed to believed that Stan think that way too? Bullshit),he then literally get tied down like a dog and yet fucking AGAIN he get possessed by Bill and oh Bill somehow know Stan enough to basically fool 2 people he was with for years?(i know that he trick Mabel too but she was just in her boy crazy phase to really think about how Dipper is acting slightly weird),then after that he is unconsicous and basically dead weight oh and what did he do once he got cure? Why yes he got bodied by the monster underground great tracking record here, after being tossed by Bill he basically sitting duck,when they got to the myster shack what did he do? WHile yes he basically ump and plant face first into the ground(Stanley is not as smart as Ford but i refuse to believed he did something this dumb or atleast explain that he didnt want to be in the elavator with so much people cramped in there) and then the most insulting moment well you think that people would take attention when Stanley trick BIll and gave them enough them for the Zodiac but hoo boy mister i notice...i notice that between pretty much all character having their own badass moment in the limelight Stan wasnt there he wasnt even mention so just because you make him do a last effort thing doesnt mean you are off the hook buddy oh and to add insult to injury no one even acknoeledge him saving the world TWICE now and Ford basically scold Stan about itso yeah all in all i say that you really...Really...REALLY seem to hate Stanley and my day is pretty much ruined. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Shame Wendy’s moving, but nice she’ll be visiting when she can. Hope to read more with her before she goes - still disappointed she never got her own episode even after she evolved from simply being ‘Dipper’s crush.’ Waste of a character, especially considering she was probably first person who preferred Dipper to Mabel, which would mean a lot to him. Also good to see how Mabel chose to go through with her confession to Ryan instead of simply pretending it didn’t happen. That almost never goes well. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Love potions always cause chaos/hilarity. Poor Dipper, guy can’t seem to cathartic a break. Then again, wouldn’t have this problem in the first place if he bothered with the occasional shower. Read more than one fic that implied there could be something between Wendy and Thompson. Not many but still apparently more common than I thought. Personally, I try to be realistic about pairings and try not to dismiss any ship, as long as it’s healthy. As long as they’re happy, who cares if it isn’t what I’d imagine for the characters? That’s what fanfics are all about. |