Very very very good, hopefully someday anti mabel or the jersey devil will appear on your ff

Bill nerf good

Good plot twist

This is by far my favourite fanfic so far, keep up the great work

maybe the black market monsters help the Pines family

I noticed a trend here, i notice that there is a charcather that you hate. First i see that always you put Mabel as the one who shines the most, and when Pacifica she is the other who shines too i tought you dislike men, or hate men, but then i saw the part of Stanley and Ford, but it hit me, you HATE DIPPER. By the simple fact that i didnt notice any moment when he shines i mean when Dipper Will defeat a Monster by himself or helping her sister or saving Pacifica from a Monster even for a second, or making doing something for himself like making the use of his inteligence, but youre just making him a punching bag. Because you didnt make any move to make Dipper reliable, or usefull. And i wonder why, maybe because some people consider him more like a main characther than Mabel? Or its because Mabel was considered the worst charcather in some YouTube videos, and you get revenge.

your fic is very good I'm glad you came back

With the finale coming, does this mean the story is coming to a close?

Dude, you killed it honestly. These two chapters were great. But if you do have a need to stop for a while, then no problem. I’m a college student too. I know your pain.

What I did was male 2 fics. One is full of ideas I just came up with and just smashed it together while making a plot out of the mess of ideas. Yeah it could’ve been executed better, but I’m still learning.

But the 2nd fic, I put my heart into it. It gives me stress relief after all the bullshit college work. I still shudder at the memory of math classes. I’d say find yourself a stress relief. Read fanfics, listen to music, watch a movie.

It’s what I do and it’s how I get ideas. I literally wrote several chapters in my first fic inspired by just a few small parts of some Sabaton songs. Inspiration can just come out of nowhere.

But I’ve said this to other authors as well. Your life comes first always. The only thing we ask is that you inform us of what’s going on because nobody likes it when a talented author just disappears and leaving behind well-written fics without telling their viewers of what’s happening.

But you do you man. I will support it because I’m in the same boat as you. Let us know if you need anything. Us college students gotta stick together.

damn ford

Finally! This was one of the greatest fanfics I've read in a while. Good to see you're back!

Nice fic, i read all in 3 days

okay as an introvert myself I'm more irritated with Mabel than I ever have been and I feel for Evan what happened to Mabel you know growing up a bit she seems even more obnoxious than she did when she was 12

please tell me ryland is gay

Please tell me this story is still being written because I love it so far. Great attention to details. Honestly forget that some of this, especially flashback, aren’t canon.