Derrick no fucks giving is awesome in this episode, is like he doesn’t give a shit anymore at this point, a quick criticism though i am not of a fan of high school parties episodes because in any media they are all very cliche and lame, even here with stuff like teenagers on a college party when they don’t give a fuck about it in real life, and i am not a fan the way Wendy tried to send Dipper and Mabel, because Robbie has a point:If things go wrong they are fucked and I don’t think it would be something Wendy would do to Dipper and Mabel, i think i am just not a fan of the trophy you used in this episode i guess, anyway i will keep reading this with excitement because you said yourself is not a filler episode so i trust you, but this wasn’t the best way to start the episode, although the Mystery Shark party and Stan thinking he was going to die was hilarious

Thank you, finally I’m not the only one who thinks Provalone Cheese isn’t anything special.

Loving Derrick’s no fucks given attitude

Robbie’s kind of right about bad things following the twins, but I’d say in this case Robbie’s gonna be the one stirring up trouble.

Not really the kind to go to parties, but college students hardly give a fuck if a high schooler is in their party unless it’s a freshman or a sophmore. Wendy will find college to be WAY more laid back if she can manage her time properly.

Prediction: Robbie’s gonna cause trouble to try and spite Dipper, Derrick’s gonna be the one to stop Robbie (edgy contest maybe?), Mabel’s gonna embarrass herself, Dipper’s gonna be the loner just walking around (like me) and maybe a girl (drunk maybe) tries to hit on him when he realizes he’s not into her but she’s persistent, the dead rise (again) and Dipper and Derrick show off their martial art skills (That’s a reach), Derrick’s gay?

Hey Rift. I am so glad that I found your story again! I began reading last summer and read about to when Stan and Ford are on their way back to Gravity Falls until I lost it. I couldn’t remember the title and there are sooo many Return to Gravity Falls stories. Luckly, I found it again and omg your fanfiction has got me hooked. I really enjoy the addition of Wendy’s mom since we don’t see or hear about her in canon. Think we’ll see her again later on? Anways, hope to read more of your story this summer. This summer has been great so far and I hope yours is too. Stay awesome! - J

Imao I honestly thought you dropped the fanfic but i am galdnis still strong is my favorite gravity falls sequel fic, i think you really nailed pacifica character here, my overall issue with how, pacifica is handled is most of redemption pacifica fanfic they always portrayed pacifica like the most perfect person ever, but i think you came close to what alex might wanted to work with her if he had more time to work her, here she isn’t too cute but he isn’t too rude ,this is how pacifica character actually is,you handled her very close to another sequel fanfic i enjoy it a lot with dipper and pacifica investigating paranormal stuff, but i ended up enjoyed this fic more because you have more cannon material to work with and you stick to it, i also enjoyed it that is a natural romance, like dipper took a while to like her and it isn’t the whole “clueless love” thing that i am not a fan and is what happens is most of romance fanfics, i actually think that makes the character know each other more is a much better movie, hope to see more of you writing her character and this relationship soon here

I came into this story expecting it to be yet another fanfic that has Wendip as the main ship... But then wouldn’t you know it MY FAVORITE GRAVITY FALLS SHIP SMACKED IN MY FACE OUT OF NO WHERE WOOOOOOOOOO

I get to the end of the chapter and sure enough, the scrapped episode about Wendy and Stan.

I recognize this plot..

WHY DID I KNOW IT WAS THAT DAMNED RICH SNOB PRESTON

this feels like season three of gravity falls legit mate

This fic is gonna be good, I can tell.

FINALLY SOMEONE THAT ACTUALLY GIVES A SHIT ABOUT THE OUTER CANON

Their relationship starting off slow. I like it. Honestly, I can imagine Pacifica doing the same thing, not being able to sleep.

Look, I like Mabel, in fact, she’s my favorite character. But after playing the RTS games like the Wargame series for a while, I really wanted to bonk her on the head with Sun Tzu’s Art of War.

Yo you have nothing to feel sorry about. Your life is more important. Life, especially school, is more important. Take your time.

Also, I had this idea about a Navajo Skin-Walker coming to Gravity Falls where it started possessing people and animals. The idea was the Skin-Walker was the Native American man that was the first possessed by Bill Cipher and the possession caused the man to go insane and turn into a Skin-Walker.

Dipcifica! Dipcifica! Dipcifica!

The chapter was great and worth the wait! A lot of action with the army, plenty of moments with the twins and Pacifica, and I loved how Dipper and Paz's relationship started to grow more. With those last few scenes, I see that Dipper now has a new interest in our favorite (probably fake) blonde rich girl. I'd love to see more episodes/chapters with her because of this.

- impulse control who. just let the inner child old, no regrets
- piecifica
- love the shenanigans
- dipper is not party people
- punny paz
- - lmao dipper
- r i p dipper
- dipper and the chipmunks
- so you can make puns but others cant, huh pacifica? i see how it is
- mabel shes tsundere, give her time
- mabel and paz get eaten by a possum and dipper is lost forever. rip
- dipper wosh him he stinky
- aw they hug

love me some paz having friends. even tho she still getting used to it