Reviews for Dimmed Light
The Four Random Ones chapter 1 . 5/5/2004
Shadowlord: Hm...I -suppose-, technically speaking, it's alright, but...grammar, please. That's a given. And...*shudders* Self-inserts are bad. BAD...
Unless it's in Anime Feud, of course. Then it's good.
But seriously. Bad.
*rereads* You know, if it was a choice between the Shuffles and Ulube, I think I'd have to go with Ulube. But that's just me. I'm the only one around who actually dislikes cliches. Unless they involve Kyoji. Or Schwarz.
Later, folks.
Alimoe chapter 1 . 7/3/2003
Wow! That was a deep poem. It reminds me of the kind of poems my friend writes. Like I said before it was very deep, and very moving.

Hehe, I like to believe that when people write they make a difference in someone's life, because the words move them and stay with them. That maybe this one story or poem can make someone's day. I was think these thoughts when reading the poem, and hoe it says you think some of these questions, I can only hope, that this is a good reply. Keep up the good work. I enjoy reading your poems so far, I hope you write more.


Alimoe 0D
DarkMoonGoddess chapter 1 . 3/11/2003
That was really good!