Reviews for Ultimate Phantom
guest chapter 2 . 7/3
As for shield and their merry pirate fury, arrogant fckers that think that whole World orbits to theirwhims. In all likelihood the portrayal of the ghost from got crossover would be better used in this universum with the whole no f ck given altitude and not being a typical floor rag and indetured servant. Nearly all cross with marvel dc Or watanot have this disgusting behaviour of making the mcs be a goody to shooes floor rag House elve servant to the whims of major powers there. Why give a f? Why not create somethin more substantial than a typical overused with great powr cms grt responsobility bs mc.
guest chapter 2 . 7/3
In the game of throneS fic the mc was beefed with Power to ninth haven. When truly he did not need sich Power there considring the scale of World and His opponents. Here on the other hand he is underpowered when It would be more resonable to have a Full packet of op considerong the foes on the Horizon. A bit unlogical.
CRUDEN chapter 7 . 5/16
You need a beta reader my friend
CRUDEN chapter 5 . 5/16
Dude fix your sentences I'm probably going to keep reviewing about this
CRUDEN chapter 2 . 5/16
Not bad however there were some grammatical errors especially with how you used some adjectives in the past tense when the previous sentences the story was in the present tense
So some minor fixes here and there and you should be good
Redripper666 chapter 2 . 3/27
its a bit mah 2 chapters in they know who he is lost more then a few powers and is being force to work for others not a very good start
Raphaim chapter 15 . 3/11
see you say harem in the summary but he hasn't even gone on that date with rouge yet and she's the only chick showing actual interest in him at the moment
Greer123 chapter 15 . 3/10
Thanks for the new chapter.
Greer123 chapter 13 . 3/10
Does this mean the attack that Magneto launched on the world in the comics will not happen?
kival737101 chapter 13 . 1/27
Danny x Rogue awesome just awesome
Blaze1992 chapter 6 . 11/27/2017
Okay sorry but I am done reading this cause I thought FF was about making your own versions so far this is going right along canon namely ending and character development wise.
Blaze1992 chapter 2 . 11/27/2017
You know it would be nice just once there would be a avengers fic where the new hero doesn't get hog-tied into the f**k up that is SHIELD.
curry-llama chapter 1 . 11/17/2017
lol Vlad married Penelope Spectra. That's hilarious XD
duskrider chapter 12 . 11/16/2017
interesting battle wonder how the presentation went.
Greer123 chapter 12 . 11/15/2017
Keep up the great more.
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