Reviews for Chuck vs The Beautiful Creatures: A Romance
CraigBes007 chapter 18 . 3/24
Thank you, loved it.
True Love Lives Forever chapter 18 . 3/1
Honestly, when I started reading this story, I wasn't sure what to expect. But you really reeled me in from the beginning to the end. Thanks for sharing.
HellsMaji chapter 18 . 1/26
First of all, this was a great story. I liked it quite a lot, and it's always nice to read a new Chuck story. Especially a good one. One thing I would have liked to see was Chuck able to control and perform magic whenever he wanted. I gather he was quite powerful, potentially. But by the time he reached the point he would have been able to, his power could basically be summarized as "taking it like a bitch." Don't get me wrong, I liked your courage explanation. I just feel that was just an aspect of his power, based on earlier instances, and not it's totality. But either way I enjoyed the journey. So thank you. And best wishes to Chuck, and congratulations to Sarah! ;)
dscncarter chapter 18 . 12/22/2017
Really enjoyed this. The pacing, characterizations, pop culture references, and Easter eggs combined to form a welcomed AU to the universe it was grounded in. The ending was equally satisfying (no "Bob" stuff here - neither Ewing, nor Newheart). Kudos and keep up the good work.
dscncarter chapter 11 . 12/22/2017
Wondered when and how Carina was going to be introduced. Enjoyed how she was employed. Casey is all squishy, but nice to see a more outwardly unencumbered version than most representations allow.
Book Two seemed to hammer repeatedly on specific ideas early, but has since smoothed out nicely. I'm guessing that exposition brings that to bear, more so than do action sequences.
dscncarter chapter 2 . 12/20/2017
Interesting take on what honesty to oneself, as well as to others, can have. Results of said “honesty” to come, I’m guessing. Enjoying the multiple points of view and the way you’ve staggered the timelines in your storytelling.
asingh123 chapter 18 . 12/15/2017
Good and different story...

But as I read this, I felt Chuck was more of a side character than being a main character like Canon...

Oh don't get me Wrong, I did't want Chuck to be some sort of Dumbledore or Merlin...and I loved that Chuck held to his Pacifist tendencies...

but still, even in the TV show when an episode would end... We knew that this task wouldn't have been possible without Chuck chipping in as well...

In your show, I felt that Chuck was more of an 'accesory', 'a convenience' or in last arc scenarios, in which Chuck was useful, they honestly felt 'artificial', and so Chuck felt more like 'Deus Ex Machina' rather than an integral part of this awesome world...
sharpce chapter 18 . 12/14/2017
This was by far one of the best ff I've read - thank you - really thank you!
Is there any chance, that there will be a follow up? Maybe pregnancy? Parenthood? New dark enemies? A young caster/reader? Hmm?
baldcoder chapter 18 . 12/12/2017
Nice finish for a really good story. Thanks for sharing!
fezzywhigg chapter 18 . 12/6/2017
Thank you for this great story!
fezzywhigg chapter 17 . 12/6/2017
It's nice to see the loose ends tied.
fezzywhigg chapter 16 . 12/6/2017
This was a good climatic scene. The action and the danger were balanced leaving me to anticipate the next chapter.
fezzywhigg chapter 15 . 12/5/2017
Great chapter! Thanks for the lore ;)
fezzywhigg chapter 14 . 12/5/2017
It was good to see Carina returned to the fold. Busgang as Orion ?
fezzywhigg chapter 13 . 12/5/2017
What a nice ending to the arc. After all the adventure and misadventure, things are settled (for now). I'm looking forward to the rest of the story. Thanks for writing.
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