BEST SHIT I HAVE EVER READ

Heart wrenching story. Gr8 b8 m8 I r8 this 8/8.

Gawd, when honoka died of overdosing on bread I started to question reality itself! I’ve never had my brain stimulated so much in one chapter.

such an emotional story. Never cried as much as i did reading this highly descriptive story, Stephan king is put to shame. 30/10 keep up the good work.

Beautiful. Absolutely fucking beautiful. The indepth build-up of what would have happened inevitably was amazing. You sir/ma'am have created such a beautiful and it made me absolutely cry of tears. The fake end and the fact that there are more chapters, meaning that there is more suffering to be endured.

Then Chapter 2, where everything started to go wrong. I totally did not see that coming. It was truly the dark age of school idol days. This was an absolute brilliant idea. I love that it didn't have to need a long build-up, because it relied on the painfulness of Chapter 1.

Chapter 3 hits and it leaves off at a cliffhanger for Chapter 4. The foreshadowing of what's going to happen. Not only that, with the pain of losing 2, there's even more pain of losing two more members. However, I'm wondering if it's like Danganronpa, but without the Class Trial. If so, then that's a brilliant idea.
Now, the recent chapter. Two more members die. ...Yep.

"Best Love Live Fanfic Ever" I just have a few ussyes issue with the title. Why is it such an understatement? For a masterpiece like this? IT BELONGS IN AN ART GALLERY! Not all heroes wear capes, and not all art belongs in a gallery, I guess. Plus, just "Love Live?" Is there going to be an intergalactic time-traveling Aqours and Muse crossover? Is it going to help bring an end to the dark age of the idols?

Overall, 100/10. Absolute fucking masterpiece. Would recommend massively.

Beautiful. Absolutely fucking beautiful. The indepth build-up of what would have happened inevitably was amazing. You sir/ma'am have created such a beautiful and it made me absolutely cry of tears. The fake end and the fact that there are more chapters, meaning that there is more suffering to be endured.

Then Chapter 2, where everything started to go wrong. I totally did not see that coming. It was truly the dark age of school idol days. This was an absolute brilliant idea. I love that it didn't have to need a long build-up, because it relied on the painfulness of Chapter 1.

Chapter 3 hits and it leaves off at a cliffhanger for Chapter 4. The foreshadowing of what's going to happen. Not only that, with the pain of losing 2, there's even more pain of losing two more members. However, I'm wondering if it's like Danganronpa, but without the Class Trial. If so, then that's a brilliant idea.
Now, the recent chapter. Two more members die. ...Yep.

"Best Love Live Fanfic Ever" I just have a few ussyes issue with the title. Why is it such an understatement? For a masterpiece like this? IT BELONGS IN AN ART GALLERY! Not all heroes wear capes, and not all art belongs in a gallery, I guess. Plus, just "Love Live?" Is there going to be an intergalactic time-traveling Aqours and Muse crossover? Is it going to help bring an end to the dark age of the idols?

Overall, 100/10. Absolute fucking masterpiece. Would recommend massively.

What... what the hell?!

Hm, there isn't really much plot or detail to the story. Try working on thinking of a plot and adding as much details to it as possible. Make sure it flows and it has plenty of details and dialouge to make it more entertaining for everyone to read.

This story has no detail in it was so ever, this is not a story and you should delete it

Wow, this is awful

Ah, these are the problems stories with a long delay of update faces. It's how they make their stories longer in order to fit more detail, yet lacks the impact it would have if it was shorter. While the story is excellent as always, I believe you would be able to wow the readers more if you keep it shorter. Nevertheless, it was a great read and it truly lived up as the best love live fanfic ever written. I especially like the part where Nico died. Brings a smile on my face. Though yes, the realization that Honoka is still dead brought a tear to my eye. If there was a continuation, I would suggest having Honoka punch Nico in the afterlife. That would be joyous.

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A PERFECT STORY MY RATING FOR IT IS OVER 9000!

Like seriously, no unnecessary things that had to be included, just pure story. I love that!

Amazing

RIP Honoka D:

You sir, are a genius. The story was absolutely brilliant. No plot holes, no dull moments and best of all, it leaves you with questions you've never thought to ask yourself like, "Can I die of bread?" or "Is Honoka an addict?" and even "What is life?". The grammar is absolutely solid and I see no mistakes whatsoever. This left me with emotions I've never known I could feel before. Like the feeling of wanting to commit suicide. Truly, a masterpiece of our time.

The part that I like the most was when Honoka are bread. God damn that was fine writing.