Reviews for Before Beasts, There Was Lightning
LuxahHeart chapter 4 . 11/25/2017
Oh I love it when my babies are together! You have done an amazing job at keeping their relationships on par with the anime. I've been reading all of these since noon today, and I plan on finishing, but I had to review on these last chapters of this fic because I'm just excited to see Ray back in the picture.
Ezabellaa chapter 11 . 11/17/2017
Hey that was very interesting plz update soon and plz do someting on kai-ayah they hardly talk to each other make this a little romantic just a little
Wanderer's Cynefin chapter 11 . 11/14/2017
This is was good. Seeing disagreements and fights remind me they are still "part-teens" XD
So we have Ice next bringing back Tala. I hope he has a bit of news over what's going on in the world. As for Ayah, I felt as if she's sort of blaming herself for all this given her resigned behaviour. I can only associate this behavior with this. And once again, what happened to Hilary Tachibana?
Wanderer's Cynefin chapter 9 . 11/14/2017
I, Desires of Autumn Leaves, announce this chapter as the evidence of the awesomeness of friendship which is tons and million times better that other yaoi fics on Kai and Tyson. Honestly!
Wanderer's Cynefin chapter 8 . 11/14/2017
This chapter was like a sudden spell of calm among all the apocalyptic things going on. As kids in the center of all this destruction (if that's fit to say) and transformations, they are doing exceptionally well because one would except them to freak out or curse or break down or stuff. Where's Hilary by the way?
Wanderer's Cynefin chapter 6 . 11/14/2017
I'm returning to read this story after ao long and this is the surprise I get - Kai transforming into more and more of Dranzer. I guess I wouldn't be surprised if he started to give an eagle cry next XD

Nonetheless, we love this AU ;)
Guest chapter 11 . 11/13/2017
I don’t want the series to end honestly I’m loving it all so far and now you’re going onto the next book I’m far too excited to see what happens now...tensions between Kai and the others...Tala’s return...roll on next week
I would actually buy this if it was made into book form.
Kat x
Sunset Ezmar chapter 11 . 11/13/2017
I felt the jab from the other side of the continent... that's why I like you so much!
There are many things that I could remark about, well, everything. But since I got scolded the last time I "complained" lets just say that I don't mind the necessary angst as much as the necessary near death experiences.
I must admit that for some teens under supernatural pressure they are handling everything pretty well, but I confess that if I were Tyson I would have thrown Kai into the water and then take him out just so that he stops giving me scare like that... Just my opinion, this is a free country.
But I still love his nonsense attitude... does that make sense to you... someone is going to kill him in his sleep, the fist in the line right now is Max.
Jokes aside, I'm looking forward to the next sequel! Does this series reaches the book 10?, because that will be kind of awesome, and scary. Because, you know, they are going to greenland! Or was it Alaska? Never mind, I kinda feel as if there is going to be some joke about superman if they stay to live there.
I shall stop here, just know that I still love the series, and I hold you to your pinky promise. Hopefully if that involves a mini Kai in the process.
Best wishes! Write you next time!
ZH chapter 11 . 11/13/2017
ICE? So my puppy is not too far? Yeah! I can't wait for next week
Guest chapter 10 . 11/7/2017
Oh wow so Dranzer came and spoke to Kai finally? I’m really interested to see when this little family of Kai’s is going to happen but even more excited about Tala coming back, our favourite red head thank you for a lovely chapter.
Kat x
ZH chapter 9 . 10/31/2017
Two chapters! I'm so happy, please update soon
Guest chapter 9 . 10/31/2017
What an emotional chapter!
You can always count on Tyson to bring Kai back to Earth (literally) hopefully Kai will snap out of his depressed state soon.
Thank you for the double update!
Kat x
WheresWilson chapter 8 . 10/31/2017
I’ve been following this series for a while, and I have to say your characterizations are wonderful. I love the interactions between the Breakers and the fact that Ayah isn’t a complete Mary-Sue. The updates every week are a consistent bright patch to look forward to. Thank you for your wonderful writing and can’t wait to see what else you have in store!
Guest chapter 7 . 10/23/2017
To the person’s called a cliffhanger! It’s certainly making me want to read on and be impatient for the next upload!
Kat x
Sunset Ezmar chapter 7 . 10/23/2017
Long time to no see! Or read for that matter.
There are many things that I would like to say, because you kinda made Kai into a sort of walking (flying?) natural disaster, but I will start with my usual complain: why do you love to hurt your main characters so much?
Don't get me wrong, I still love the story - sadomasochism? - but I always feel like... Cheated, everytime you put such a glorious scenes or escapes only to have them fall of grace immediately after... Not my cup of tea, the British would say... Still, it was kind of hilarious...
I'm glad to be - sort of - back, at least to see how much this has progressed, thank you for all the time you spend in it, as a fan is really appreciate. I'm eager to see the end, I can feel it close, if you know what I mean.
Best wishes to you and your family!
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