|Reviews for Adria|
| EroSlackerMicha chapter 18 . 6/15
man things are going to get bloody...er soon once the Furlings focus on Adria. keep up the good work hope to see more soon
| Armiture chapter 18 . 4/21
I'm glad I finally found the time to read this story. I rather enjoyed it and looking forward to learning what race is older than the Alteran. I hope you manage to update soon. Thanks for the good story!
| PappyOldGuy chapter 18 . 1/28
Interesting and (well enough written in my opinion) very good story. I like it, I like it a lot! It seems to be meshing the realities quite well, and I can hardly wait (but I will) to see where it all goes. I do know this, when someone who is not the creator of a character, writes about them, it is to have them do something that the creator doesn't want to or didn't think of. I know that I always think of my favorite characters doing things, I have never read of in books or seen them doing in movies. I think it is fantastic that others (here in "FanFiction") are actually writing their stories of what they want them to do in a "What If" world. For those who complain that the characters would not do this or that, forget them. You need to write this first for yourself, and then for the rest of us who do enjoy your take on what just might, could, should, would and probability (if a frog had wings, his ass wouldn't bump the ground nearly so often) can happen. I do know this as well, I am enjoying it and will follow it as long as you will write it. Also, do NOT feel pushed to post, sometimes the words and thoughts just flow and sometimes you have to cogitate for a bit. Just learn to let them grow at their own pace and those of us who appreciate them will be here to read them when they are posted.
Looking forward to the next post and thank you so much for sharing.
| Leoxnin chapter 17 . 1/5
Keep up the good work. Love this fic, can't wait for the next chapter
| Araytigre chapter 17 . 12/14/2017
Her "Brother" finally made a reappearance, it will be interesting to see what the two of them do, now that they have recognised each other. She has proven herself a Warrior by killing the other Furling in single combat, and she only had herself and her Combo-Staff. The other question that begs to be asked, why were they hunting the SG teams, and why there were three of them, as normally there is only one. At least Sha're/Amaunet is safe and secured. Thank You. TTFN
| marlastiano chapter 17 . 12/14/2017
| Araytigre chapter 16 . 11/13/2017
Nice little filler piece, which in my poor opinion didn't do much for the story as a whole, other than showing Adria's first offworld mission, and Jack's keeping a grudge do to him getting zapped by her during "the Test". Now, in the previous chapter, I really thought it was really interesting about her Blood having properties similar to the Zenomorphs, which implies that her body is still changing, into what remains to be seen. Particularly, as the previous blood work that Fraiser did on her didn't show that. Thank You. TTFN
| marlastiano chapter 16 . 11/12/2017
| Foolish chapter 5 . 11/10/2017
I'm really enjoying the story but there's two very minor points I want to correct. Adria would have been looking at the Aurora Australis not the Borealis and polar bears live at the north pole. As I said, very minor points. Keep up the good work
| Araytigre chapter 14 . 11/7/2017
We already knew from canon that some of the writings in the repository was Furling (as the other three were Nox, Asgardian, and Ancient), so it didn't surprise that she would figure out that part. With her being able to utilise her Staff, and now the Box leads me to come to the conclusion that somehow her "father" either was or had Furling DNA. Either that, or when she was with the Furling on their Ship, the Green Goo that she was encased in (to heal her), changed her DNA somewhat in order for her to utilise their Tech. I know it sounds a little far fetched, but stranger things have happened, and No One knows who (or what) her Father is/was. For Daniel to even think about using the Mirror (again), seems to me a Very Foolish thing to do, as well as opening a Major Can of Worms. Thank You. TTFN
| Sarc1407 chapter 14 . 11/7/2017
I absolutely love this story. Really good integration of both the Stargate and AvP universes. Looking forward to the next update. Keep up the good work.
| marlastiano chapter 14 . 11/5/2017
| Araytigre chapter 13 . 11/1/2017
Michael IS lucky that she didn't kill him, which she could have in a heartbeat. Fortunately for the Pack that Adria abdicated her Alpha status to her stepdad Brandon, as the vast majority of Packs have Male Alphas, with a few rare exceptions that have a Female Alpha. That is not to say that she couldn't do it, she had the wisdom not to (nor ANY desire to want to either), she also knew that she wouldn't be able to do a good job at it, and she also doesn't have the telepathic connection to them either which would hinder the effectiveness of the Pack. Now she can join the SGC without any reservations, which in the long run will be much more fulfilling for her, or at least until Scar and the Furling decide what to do with her. On another note, what kind of Mother abandons a child, then thinks that she can come back a decade or more later, and think that she has any say about said child, some people. Thank You. TTFN
| zmanjz chapter 13 . 11/1/2017
This is an excellent story, im quite pleased with the manner that the characters are being developed. Then there is adria herself. Compelling character. Her ptsd is legit having to put a round through her mentor to end his suffering, then watch a chestburster come out alone would reduce a person to jelly. She shows remarkable resilience desoite the mental and physical scars.
There are clearly a number of games a foot... the question to be had is which games are dangerous distractions and which games are the main event.
| djmegamouth chapter 6 . 10/31/2017
Well that went to hell fast.