Reviews for Because Of The War
Guest chapter 10 . 7/6
I feel like age shouldnt be able to be deduced that easily. At least not without Thinker powers. Girls tend to finish puberty earlier, and taller women would be able to seem more mature by several years. And especially if the face is covered, it would be very hard just from body alone.
Grimreaper07 chapter 2 . 2/11
I am currently rereading this for the second time and I got to say that this fic is absolutely amazing I love the writing the pacing the way u switch between POV’s every so often and so much more hope u continue this fic some time in the future Historical love your writing in general I’ve read a lot of your fics take care
ShadeslayerX chapter 13 . 1/25
A Middle-Eastern woman with a kid and a goth... It doesn't take much to say 'S9 is in town and down to party'. Welp, there goes Tagg's plan shrug rotflol
Grimreaper07 chapter 16 . 1/23
This is an absolutely amazing story so far and I can’t wait to see what happens next definitely looking forward to it whenever the next chapter comes out
scyfly chapter 1 . 1/12
if the dwa was this prominent the whole city would flock to them
viveros528 chapter 16 . 12/7/2023
I like this story very much I hope you continue this story
Spacemonkey777 chapter 16 . 6/29/2023
Amazing story. I hope you continue
Alehhandro chapter 16 . 6/6/2023
Welcome back and boy-oh-boy do i enjoy myself some nice escalation

funny enough, i'm also currently on a x-com gaming binge and this is doubly cool to recognise in-game lingo.
WearyCurmudgeon chapter 16 . 5/24/2023
- Long range
Piggot does recall that snipers are a long range option as well yes?

An anti-material rifle in the hands of a good marksman can reach out and touch someone from 1.2 km away.

With proper elevation you might be able to jack that up to 1.5 km.

And that doesn't address the range on the Gauss weapons.

If Miss Militia can put a slug into Manton's head than that's all she wrote, as there won't be enough left for Bonesaw to reconstitute him.

Clone him later? Sure. But fix a residue of blood based mist? That's a bit beyond her.

- Pinpoint
Nice set-up for the further conflict with Coil.

(Also have to say that Taylor's Think Tank will be quite impressive between Dinah, Emma and Lisa. Emma to find the targets, Lisa to come up with the right questions and Dinah giving the odds, thus further cranking up mission efficiency.)

- Rune
So she's definitely salvageable, Othala not so sure about. Too invested in Victor to follow another path.

Unless he croaks vs the Nine.

- Poll
More an expression of interest rather than a vote.
As I consider it a coin toss as to whether the HP/WoW or ME/Marvel is the most interesting of all those you listed.
TheLastGarou chapter 16 . 5/24/2023
Earth-616 has been getting a lot of flak lately (mostly from its own writers, to make it worse) so I'll toss in a vote for the Marvel/Mass Effect story, here.
I know it's not going to count for the poll, but you've got it anyway.

...now to go figure out how to navigate Patroné.
Chessicfayth chapter 16 . 5/23/2023
So hard to choose between the PJO and ME/Marvel. I eventually went over to your patreon and voted for Shadows and Dust, but I wouldn't mind either!
SurplusHook chapter 2 . 5/23/2023
Why did coil not just use his power to try using tattletale then if it goes bad go to the other one ? Am I not understanding his power or ?
shugokage chapter 16 . 5/22/2023
Excellent job on this interesting chapter!
linx007 chapter 16 . 5/22/2023
Looks like Calvert's already too large for his stomach eyes just went up several orders of magnitude. We all knew that XCOM was gonna come down on him hard the second he targeted Dinah but if he touches Emma? Even God would look away from the wrath they would rain upon him. Possible hints about recruiting Rune? If so nice. The stage is set and I can't wait to see how the Battle of Beloit will play out.
Guest chapter 16 . 5/22/2023
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