Reviews for Mated
Guest chapter 4 . 5/20
More please
beatrice2020 chapter 4 . 4/5
Cant wait for more!
Guest chapter 4 . 3/9
More please
BlueRose chapter 4 . 1/26
I didn't like this chapter and will stop reading this story, as the writing style makes me think it's written by someone underage. The themes are also a little disturbing, Hermione is so young.
The fade in/ off stuff is really stops the flow of this story. Research better ways to change scenes. If your not including any details of the bedroom scenes then you could change this rating to T.
Gramma is also important for a story, all the great stories on this site are well written, consider getting someone to proof read your work.
Smootsmokey chapter 4 . 1/9
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Smootsmokey chapter 3 . 12/19/2017
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elh4587 chapter 1 . 10/28/2017
I mean... this has potential it just seems written by someone very young. Just because someone is a virgin doesn't mean more likely to "fall pregnant" Also, the repetition of Hermione and Severus's names is a bit distracting for flow. I think cleaned up or revised it is a good idea
Guest chapter 3 . 10/20/2017
Wow, this just got crappier.
PiffyEQ chapter 3 . 10/20/2017
That punishment is so much better than being sent to Azkhaban. He so deserved it!
Blue night fairy chapter 3 . 10/18/2017
Great chapter
HGxSS Always chapter 2 . 10/4/2017
Good
PiffyEQ chapter 1 . 10/4/2017
Did Viktor receive any punishment for trying to rape Hermione and trying to bind her to him?

I hope someone hits him with an impotency spell! Bastard deserves it!

I am looking forward to reading more :)
Blue night fairy chapter 1 . 9/25/2017
Interesting story, keep writing and update soon.
HGxSS Always chapter 1 . 9/24/2017
Good start
DarkStrom920 chapter 1 . 9/22/2017
I love the story so far keep it up :)
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