You're putting some blank spaces here. Did or did not Touma lost his memories? and Deep Blood arc is already passed?

I hope this ends with Mugino as the only romance

I can already see what's going to happen after this, I just hope you can still make my heart bleed reading it. Good work boss

Welp, it was fun while it lasted. Memory loss, here we come!

All Hail the Captain

Biri-Biri has learned of the truth. Now, what of the rest?

You were already doing good. We were getting to the part where the valleys of Heaven shall welcome us, and you spat in our faces.

You're doing great

Absolutely loving it, good job

Just started reading, am very interested to see how this story goes. It's been two years since the last update, if you're reading this I hope your health is okay.

Man, i really love this story as there isn’t that many Mugino x Touma stories out there. And this one has got to be one of the most impressive works for this rare pair. I wish the author would come back to update this story. It’s been over 2 years. He left once COVID started up so I hope he is ok.

If so please update this story.

Amazing fanfic, hope you'll come back and make another chapter

Thought I'd pop by and catch another chapter of this and am glad I did. Your author voice is amusing and easy to read, so while I might chug through some stories, I often easily go through this and am happier for it. So, I do hope that doesn't change.

Admittedly, I still have not gotten the chance to watch the anime this story is based on. Still, I get the sense that everything that is happening is a weird sort of good. I remain amused that we get to see an entire relationship through the eyes of people not intimately involved and despite me sometimes wanting to have you jump POV, I am quite amused by this for now. Aaaand it looks like you're gonna keep it that way. Good to know.

I also admit the fight was hard to follow as someone who understands little of the world and the powers they have, but the dialogue was amusing, so the tradeoff was well worth it.

Thanks for the effort you put into creating this story for us to read and I look forward to starting the next chapter.

Str ata

Oh god I finally took the time to actually finish the rest of the story so far and it's hella good

First off, I admit I have little to no knowledge on the current characters other than the occasional peek over the shoulder of a particular SO when he was watching. Still, I also admit that didn't seem to matter too much with this first chapter. We find out quite a bit about Mugino just from her apparent stalkers alone that everything seems to fall into place. I'm sure I'll put name to each face pretty soon, but until then, I'm just enjoying the story.

Gotta admit though, a 5,000 yen meal as a low end made me spit out my drink. The girl has some high standards. XD Poor guy...

I do admire your ability to make what sounds like quite a mundane conversation and meet-up sound exciting. Seeing it through others' eyes was a good move in that regard, allowing us to see the complete abnormality of it all and, perhaps like the characters themselves, be completely creeped out. As someone who has no idea who this guy character is, I admit I found myself for mimicking their displeasure, which might be a first for your readers. As a newbie to this fandom everything is, well, new, so any author tricks you might be trying to pull will completely work on me. XD Looking forward to it.

I admit, I would like to jump into the mind of Mugino at one point for an extended period of time as she sounds like a really interesting perspective if not spicy and quite a bit sarcastic, I'm thinking.

Still, I will read on, and, I admit, I am quite looking forward to it.