Um. Wow. That was really good, Harry. Really good.

Well written indeed!

This is an amazing story! The flow is steady and the entire thing well written.

Well written indeed!

Very well written but I have to continually stop questioning the why of it all. In time travel stories sometimes something occurs to necessitate going back. So obviously it should be more clear why in this story. Tilda's pregnancy must have happened a first time on its own. Without any time travel. The idea that the only way Harry and she get together is his decision to go back in order to ensure she gets pregnant because it already happened makes no sense. I get that time travel often presents these loops that are confusing but it seems a better reason for Harry to go back and make sure things happen the way they did the first time is necessary. Did I miss something? Or is it hopefully something yet to be revealed? Oh and I am disappointed in Ginny's childish reaction. And then saddened to hear she dies at 48, coincidently Tildas age when Harry is 32 and going back to sleep with her younger self.

Well written indeed!

wait what? where is Tilda, why you went trought a time skip when you had so much stuff you could continue with. why ruin it like this?

Lol! that last line. Harry the Scamp.

Awesome chapter! It was great to finally see how things played out with him and Tilda. I'm wracking my brain to remember what happened in Brighton though. Looking forward to reading what Harry wants to ask himself!

good seeing fun with friends

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I really enjoyed this chapter. I did wonder how Harry was going to go about convincing Tilda to sleep with him and starting by talking to her so she starts to know him makes the most sense. I don't think I realized that Harry wouldn't know that he needs to impregnate Tilda so that could end badly, but with their chemistry it'll probably be fine. We're starting to come full circle on this story, which is exciting. Looking forward to reading what happens next!

Well done!

Well written!

Wow! A lot of big reveals this chapter! First of all, Harry being MoM is kind of hilarious since he's not the best at beurocracy and he flouts rules; that being said, he would still do well because he cares so much about people. The birthday spell thing is interesting, and I'm glad we finally know how that happened. Uhm excuse me -how could you do that to Harry? When he was talking to Parvati about the memory charms I was like oh no, please don't be what I think this is about. And then he confirms it later on... That was so sad. Poor Harry has been through enough. The selective memory charm was good because I wondered how that was gonna work with Tilda since Harry would have a hard time forgetting about Ginny. Anyway, I love this story and it's nice to finally have the mystery from the beginning solved. I look forward to seeing how things go between Harry and Tilda and how he explains his age to her.