Great story!

This is a story not a movie. Jumping back and forth in the timeline just gives away your plot which was the only reason to read this. And i wondered why a good story had so little follows. Thanks for ruining it

Good start can be shortened as i feel like the story drags a bit but so far so good

Extremely well planned story, great structure. Plenty surprises along the way. For most of the story I didn't expect to ever understand exactly what had happened during that confrontation with Voldemort at Tilda's house, I admit it annoyed me that so many mysteries had been left unexplained, like the Muggle man with the dog. I wonder, though, how much Dumbledore knew or guessed about what had happened that night.
Really good work, truly.

Thanks for a great (re)read! Very nicely done.

Tilda is impossibly thick and has made so many poor choices it's hard for me to sympathize. Bad decisions just rippling out hurting others. She could have prepared her son and certainly could have let Harry know which is unforgivable. Plot wise I understand but it's hard to keep reading a story where the main character is so unlikeable.

For the love of all that is holey, I hope this doesn't mean what I think this means... I almost don't want to read what happens next... my heart is going to be break for him I know it!
I love ya Barb but hasn't he been through enough?! Lol

Very interesting so far, and I couldn't help noticing the parallels to when Harry was on the run in his other life (in the Psychic Serpent universe).

Looking forward to the rest of the story.

Tilda is a very unstable character, somewhat unlikeable. And an eleven year old boy wouldn't necessarily look like his father since children that young look like children. So everyone instantly thinking this boy must be Harrys son is a bit far fetched especially as Harry is so young. I find myself arguing out loud to no one.

absolutely amazing. It was a rollercoaster and the attention to detail was outstanding. The feels at the end were just perfect

I'm not sure if the twins at St Clare's joke was intentional or not, but if it was it was brilliant. If not, the twins at St Clare's was a book series in the 1950s.

Interesting story, thanks for sharing! Your writing/story-telling is engaging and well done. It kept me interested in reading through to the end. I wasn’t a big fan of the cheating part of the storyline but understand that was part of the way you brought tension/conflict to the plot.

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Such a wonderful ending to this story! How you managed to keep track of everything I'll never understand, but well done indeed!

Really? You decided to jump ahead several years without any details? Wow.

I was enjoying the story up to this point, but I won’t be reading further just can’t get past this glaring - what? A plot twist? A writer who fave up on the story and decided to just tack on something else in hopes readers will overlook the gaping hole?

No, thanks. Not for me!